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mung kuan
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Kagamiko
Angelic Harmony
Meika-Chan
D-Dei
Sasori Kung fu masta
Shinobi's Redemption
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Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5
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i second that motion...
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...THIRD PAGE!!! =D
lol, thanks that you believe in me.
if i mess you guys up, i'm truly sorry for making the horrible OOC mistake.
lol, thanks that you believe in me.
if i mess you guys up, i'm truly sorry for making the horrible OOC mistake.
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just make us act the way we do in public...if you need help, then ask us how we'd act in this position...that would be the easiest way to go...
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thanks ^___^
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anytime Deathy...
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Deathy!!! I updated mine!! NOW UPDATE YOURS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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erm... soon?
i got the chapter title and quote down ^_^
i got the chapter title and quote down ^_^
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WOW!!
IT'S AWSOME!!
IT'S AWSOME!!
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lols
thank you?
thank you?
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Cha!!! It rocks like hell Deathy!
Great job!
Great job!
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muku just being muku!death-chan wrote:lols
thank you?
*glomp*
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WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!!??
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uhm... Hikage and I need to start ^_^;;;
I'll try to get it up today.
I'll try to get it up today.
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YAAAAY!
*UBER-MEGA-SUPER-GLOMP*
*UBER-MEGA-SUPER-GLOMP*
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*ducks and punches muku*
now let's kill the story :D
now let's kill the story :D
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*rubs head*
why you be so mean?
*over it*
HURRY WRITE MORE!
why you be so mean?
*over it*
HURRY WRITE MORE!
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*Glomps Death*
Nya, your nice to me...right?
If you update, Charm will update ^__^
Nya, your nice to me...right?
If you update, Charm will update ^__^
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..glomping death?...show off...Angelic Harmony wrote:*Glomps Death*
Nya, your nice to me...right?
If you update, Charm will update ^__^
-_-
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- Spoiler:
- The first Alice was a courageous red one
With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
She cut down, many things that stood in her way
Making a path that was a trail of blood
The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
A prisoned sinner
There was no way of knowing she was there
Except the red path that followed behind her
The second Alice was a calm, blue one
Singing a song that filled wonderland
The false notes which he sang till the end
Created a crazy world in wonderland
That Alice was born of a Flower
Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die
The third Alice was an innocent green one
A beautiful figure there in wonderland
She had fooled many people to do her bid
A strange country was then created up
The Alice was the queen of the country
Possessed by a dream of distortion
Afraid of losing her life to death
Ruling the country of hers forever
Walking down a red path in the forest
Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
An invitation to them from the castle was
The playing card of hearts
The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
They were curious througout the wonderland
They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
From there wandering that they had just arrived
A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother
They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
The two were to never to wake from their dream
The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!
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muku, because you said "do the world a favor and eat a hobo" she aint updating..
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MUKU IS AN IDIOT!!!DeI-kUn~ wrote:muku, because you said "do the world a favor and eat a hobo" she aint updating..
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i'm done with the chapter. but maybe i won't put it up..
i'm done with the chapter. but maybe i won't put it up..
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BEL.the.Ripper.
- Spoiler:
- The first Alice was a courageous red one
With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
She cut down, many things that stood in her way
Making a path that was a trail of blood
The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
A prisoned sinner
There was no way of knowing she was there
Except the red path that followed behind her
The second Alice was a calm, blue one
Singing a song that filled wonderland
The false notes which he sang till the end
Created a crazy world in wonderland
That Alice was born of a Flower
Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die
The third Alice was an innocent green one
A beautiful figure there in wonderland
She had fooled many people to do her bid
A strange country was then created up
The Alice was the queen of the country
Possessed by a dream of distortion
Afraid of losing her life to death
Ruling the country of hers forever
Walking down a red path in the forest
Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
An invitation to them from the castle was
The playing card of hearts
The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
They were curious througout the wonderland
They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
From there wandering that they had just arrived
A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother
They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
The two were to never to wake from their dream
The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!
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death-chan wrote:-___-
i'm done with the chapter. but maybe i won't put it up..
why?
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she's cold and cruel...she knows muku wants to read it...DeI-kUn~ wrote:death-chan wrote:-___-
i'm done with the chapter. but maybe i won't put it up..
why?
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BEL.the.Ripper.
- Spoiler:
- The first Alice was a courageous red one
With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
She cut down, many things that stood in her way
Making a path that was a trail of blood
The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
A prisoned sinner
There was no way of knowing she was there
Except the red path that followed behind her
The second Alice was a calm, blue one
Singing a song that filled wonderland
The false notes which he sang till the end
Created a crazy world in wonderland
That Alice was born of a Flower
Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die
The third Alice was an innocent green one
A beautiful figure there in wonderland
She had fooled many people to do her bid
A strange country was then created up
The Alice was the queen of the country
Possessed by a dream of distortion
Afraid of losing her life to death
Ruling the country of hers forever
Walking down a red path in the forest
Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
An invitation to them from the castle was
The playing card of hearts
The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
They were curious througout the wonderland
They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
From there wandering that they had just arrived
A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother
They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
The two were to never to wake from their dream
The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!
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puhhahahaha
she's cool like that :3
she's cool like that :3
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Alright fools, chapter 3 up. Muku, the next time you insult hobos, you're dead.
Yeesh. It's not even that good.
Characters (3 New, check Glacier):
A Dei&Death fanfic.
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III : Fear
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A single death is a tragedy; a million deaths is a statistic.
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Hotaru jumped, dodging a spray of blood. “What the–”
Something flashed through Hiro’s eyes. “The civilians…”
Haruka jumped out of the window and shouted something that they didn’t understand, unsheathing a bladeless katana.
However, Hihari seemed to have understood perfectly. “A team of Glacier chuunin traveled with me and Haruka. I asked them to surround nii’s office, just in case… I was right.”
“I apologize,” Xavier murmured. “We did not bring any reinforcements, only our surviving genin teams.”
Mizuki poked her head out of the window, her dark eyes scanning the village. “Good…”
“What’s so good about civilians getting attacked?” Komui asked blankly.
Kyou nodded thoughtfully. “The exams are going to start in the arena over there,” he said. “You can already see the majority of the Sand village gathered inside. This means that we only need to dispatch the main shinobi teams to the arena and have little groups of backup going through the streets and bringing other civilians to safety.”
“Less talking, more action!” Haruka jumped through the window once more, her bladeless sword now an intricate, icy blade covered with blood. “Katsumi, Yukiko, and Itami seem to be faring well but they’re outnumbered. C’mon!”
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Hiro whistled in awe. “That’s a lot of missing-nin over there.”
“That’s not good,” Kyou said flatly, easily slitting the throats of a couple nin that tried to break through the protective circle (Hotaru, Kyou, and Haruka) to get to Hihari and Hiro.
“Haruka, Hotaru, Kyou. You can stop that now,” Hiro said casually. “We’re kages, we fight as well. Go to other places and make sure the civilians are safe.” Even as he was talking, the sandy ground opened up in the middle of a group of opponent ninja, swallowing them alive.
Hotaru looked like she was going to protest, but followed Kyou to the other end of the village. Haruka, as well, went off to assist some Sand chuunin that were injured.
A line of missing-nins started dropping dead with gargled screams of pain, holes where their throats should be. Xavier appeared at the end of the line, flicking blood off his kunai. “Komui, please. Take this seriously.”
The said teen snorted, slamming his palm into a poor victim of his, causing the missing-nin to choke up blood. “Bah. A person of high importance like me shouldn’t be killing weak underlings like these.”
“All of you, duck!”
Hihari was flying in the air, icy wings protruding from her back. Even as she swooped down, enemy nin froze in their tracks due to intense cold. Mizuki took this as an opportunity to finish them off easily with poisoned senbon while Hihari shot ice arrows with so much intensity that one arrow even pierced completely through one ninja into another.
Slowly, the first group of intruding ninja dwindled. Remainders of the streets and some buildings lay on the ground, destroyed.
“I’ve never seen such a large group of missing-nin band together like this,” Hihari commented, her ice wings finally melting into a clear puddle of water on the ground.
“They weren’t that powerful, though. No one of high importance,” Kyou said quietly.
Hotaru groaned. “Great.”
Mizuki stared off into the direction Hotaru was looking at. “There’s another group… perfect. Just… perfect.”
“But hey,” Komui commented mildly. “Don’t you notice anything… different about them?”
A small pause.
“Holy…” Hihari breathed. “It… can’t be.”
“It… is…” Kyou said quietly.
The new group of ninja approaching had glazed looks in their eyes, as if they were asleep with their eyes open. Some had stitches on them, as if their whole bodies were sewed together. And… their headbands…
“They’re the dead genin teams that disappeared,” Xavier said quietly. “We cannot attack, even if they are… deceased.”
“It’s… impossible.” Mizuki stumbled back a bit. “The only people that probably know the art of corpses are probably hunter-nin and a few other Shadow ninja…”
“So what are we going to do?” Haruka asked quietly.
“Hihari-sama!” Three girls jumped from the roof of a worn building, landing with perfect grace in front of Hihari.
A teenage girl stepped forward, her black, waist-length hair coming out of its low ponytail. “We found the source of where all the enemy ninja are coming from.”
“I’m staying behind to take care of my animals,” a girl with red shoulder-length and pitch-black eyes announced, holding up a small rabbit carefully.
Hihari nodded. “Alright, will do, Itami.” The Hikage sheathed her katana and looked at Itami’s eyes, which were changing from black to a calmer brown. “And calm down. Don't get so... excited.”
Itami nodded. “Will do.” She looked back. “Katsumi, Yukiko… you can go without me, right?”
The girl that told Hihari the information, Yukiko, nodded. “Yeah. We’ve got it under control.”
Katsumi stepped forward, her dog ears and tail disappearing slowly. “Aa. This way.”
Hiro looked surprised. “Oh, Katsumi’s one of those…?”
Haruka nodded. “Yes, Hiro-sama. But not now. We have someone to confront.”
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A cloaked figure wearing a mask stood a couple of yards from where they were hidden (in trees, with their chakra masked). Pale, feminine hands were stretched out. Upon closer scrutiny thin strings of chakra were coming from her hands.
A small laugh came from her. Small, but hysterical.
“Now!” Hiro whispered.
The group, which was positioned in different trees that surrounded the cloaked figure, launched weapons at the person, who miraculously managed to dodge all of them.
“It’s not surprising,” Xavier murmured when Hihari seemed shocked at the fact that her ice arrow missed. “If she can control a large amount of corpses that well, she must be a shinobi of high level.”
However, the chakra-enhanced kunai thrown by Mizuki managed to hit the mask square in the middle.
Slowly, the porcelain mask crumbled and fell to the ground and the woman cursed vehemently. Quickly, she disappeared into the shadows and melted into it.
Hotaru made a noise of disappointment. “She got away.”
“I… know that woman…”
“What?!” Komui stared at Mizuki, who seemed like she was in shock. “How?!”
“Calm down, Komui,” Hihari barked. “Mizuki, how do you know this woman?”
Mizuki took a deep breath shakily. “She… was my jounin teacher.”
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Next time: The Great Nations’ kages’ strength, revealed! (Finally.)
Yeesh. It's not even that good.
Characters (3 New, check Glacier):
- Spoiler:
Shadow:
Xavier - Endless Nothing
Mizuki - 2bloodly2love
Komui - Titaniumxvx
Sand:
Hiro - quater
Hotaru - *Sasori-Kun*
Kyou - Renden2005
Glacier:
Hihari - DeI-kUn~
Haruka - furaiigon
Katsumi - Kiami
Yukiko - Angelic Harmony
Itami - knssquad
A Dei&Death fanfic.
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III : Fear
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A single death is a tragedy; a million deaths is a statistic.
-
Hotaru jumped, dodging a spray of blood. “What the–”
Something flashed through Hiro’s eyes. “The civilians…”
Haruka jumped out of the window and shouted something that they didn’t understand, unsheathing a bladeless katana.
However, Hihari seemed to have understood perfectly. “A team of Glacier chuunin traveled with me and Haruka. I asked them to surround nii’s office, just in case… I was right.”
“I apologize,” Xavier murmured. “We did not bring any reinforcements, only our surviving genin teams.”
Mizuki poked her head out of the window, her dark eyes scanning the village. “Good…”
“What’s so good about civilians getting attacked?” Komui asked blankly.
Kyou nodded thoughtfully. “The exams are going to start in the arena over there,” he said. “You can already see the majority of the Sand village gathered inside. This means that we only need to dispatch the main shinobi teams to the arena and have little groups of backup going through the streets and bringing other civilians to safety.”
“Less talking, more action!” Haruka jumped through the window once more, her bladeless sword now an intricate, icy blade covered with blood. “Katsumi, Yukiko, and Itami seem to be faring well but they’re outnumbered. C’mon!”
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Hiro whistled in awe. “That’s a lot of missing-nin over there.”
“That’s not good,” Kyou said flatly, easily slitting the throats of a couple nin that tried to break through the protective circle (Hotaru, Kyou, and Haruka) to get to Hihari and Hiro.
“Haruka, Hotaru, Kyou. You can stop that now,” Hiro said casually. “We’re kages, we fight as well. Go to other places and make sure the civilians are safe.” Even as he was talking, the sandy ground opened up in the middle of a group of opponent ninja, swallowing them alive.
Hotaru looked like she was going to protest, but followed Kyou to the other end of the village. Haruka, as well, went off to assist some Sand chuunin that were injured.
A line of missing-nins started dropping dead with gargled screams of pain, holes where their throats should be. Xavier appeared at the end of the line, flicking blood off his kunai. “Komui, please. Take this seriously.”
The said teen snorted, slamming his palm into a poor victim of his, causing the missing-nin to choke up blood. “Bah. A person of high importance like me shouldn’t be killing weak underlings like these.”
“All of you, duck!”
Hihari was flying in the air, icy wings protruding from her back. Even as she swooped down, enemy nin froze in their tracks due to intense cold. Mizuki took this as an opportunity to finish them off easily with poisoned senbon while Hihari shot ice arrows with so much intensity that one arrow even pierced completely through one ninja into another.
Slowly, the first group of intruding ninja dwindled. Remainders of the streets and some buildings lay on the ground, destroyed.
“I’ve never seen such a large group of missing-nin band together like this,” Hihari commented, her ice wings finally melting into a clear puddle of water on the ground.
“They weren’t that powerful, though. No one of high importance,” Kyou said quietly.
Hotaru groaned. “Great.”
Mizuki stared off into the direction Hotaru was looking at. “There’s another group… perfect. Just… perfect.”
“But hey,” Komui commented mildly. “Don’t you notice anything… different about them?”
A small pause.
“Holy…” Hihari breathed. “It… can’t be.”
“It… is…” Kyou said quietly.
The new group of ninja approaching had glazed looks in their eyes, as if they were asleep with their eyes open. Some had stitches on them, as if their whole bodies were sewed together. And… their headbands…
“They’re the dead genin teams that disappeared,” Xavier said quietly. “We cannot attack, even if they are… deceased.”
“It’s… impossible.” Mizuki stumbled back a bit. “The only people that probably know the art of corpses are probably hunter-nin and a few other Shadow ninja…”
“So what are we going to do?” Haruka asked quietly.
“Hihari-sama!” Three girls jumped from the roof of a worn building, landing with perfect grace in front of Hihari.
A teenage girl stepped forward, her black, waist-length hair coming out of its low ponytail. “We found the source of where all the enemy ninja are coming from.”
“I’m staying behind to take care of my animals,” a girl with red shoulder-length and pitch-black eyes announced, holding up a small rabbit carefully.
Hihari nodded. “Alright, will do, Itami.” The Hikage sheathed her katana and looked at Itami’s eyes, which were changing from black to a calmer brown. “And calm down. Don't get so... excited.”
Itami nodded. “Will do.” She looked back. “Katsumi, Yukiko… you can go without me, right?”
The girl that told Hihari the information, Yukiko, nodded. “Yeah. We’ve got it under control.”
Katsumi stepped forward, her dog ears and tail disappearing slowly. “Aa. This way.”
Hiro looked surprised. “Oh, Katsumi’s one of those…?”
Haruka nodded. “Yes, Hiro-sama. But not now. We have someone to confront.”
-
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A cloaked figure wearing a mask stood a couple of yards from where they were hidden (in trees, with their chakra masked). Pale, feminine hands were stretched out. Upon closer scrutiny thin strings of chakra were coming from her hands.
A small laugh came from her. Small, but hysterical.
“Now!” Hiro whispered.
The group, which was positioned in different trees that surrounded the cloaked figure, launched weapons at the person, who miraculously managed to dodge all of them.
“It’s not surprising,” Xavier murmured when Hihari seemed shocked at the fact that her ice arrow missed. “If she can control a large amount of corpses that well, she must be a shinobi of high level.”
However, the chakra-enhanced kunai thrown by Mizuki managed to hit the mask square in the middle.
Slowly, the porcelain mask crumbled and fell to the ground and the woman cursed vehemently. Quickly, she disappeared into the shadows and melted into it.
Hotaru made a noise of disappointment. “She got away.”
“I… know that woman…”
“What?!” Komui stared at Mizuki, who seemed like she was in shock. “How?!”
“Calm down, Komui,” Hihari barked. “Mizuki, how do you know this woman?”
Mizuki took a deep breath shakily. “She… was my jounin teacher.”
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Next time: The Great Nations’ kages’ strength, revealed! (Finally.)