Kabuto (Possible Spoilers)

dang. I like your idea much better! So, who gets the first line?

I think it should be Kabuto.

We open up explain the setting of Sai's house, and it explains how Sai is talking to a stranger, lots of imagery, then Kabuto.

"So you understand your mission Sai?"

"Yes, I understand what I am to do if I am to join your revolutionary force. However I must ask, how did you find me? And what makes you think I wont destroy you here and now?"

"I found you easily through the root network, you are quite well known there, and don't look so surprised I was a Konoha ninja, a long time ago I was well informed of Root, and established myself on the goings there. As for why I feel you wont turn, well let's just say it's a gut feeling, doubled by, you want to go through with this mission as much as I do. Don't you?"

"Yes you are right, I do want to make my mark on the world, I wont be a forgotten page like brother. I will kill the 5th Hokage Tsunade"


Something kinda like that...An opener ^_^

"So, do you understand your mission, Sai?"

The Konoha ninja nodded, dark eyes scanning over the information that had just been passed to him as the rain poured from overhead, dampening his black hair.

"I understand what is requested of me to join you. But, before I do so, I must ask how you found me, and why you think I will not kill you here and now?" Said raised a wary eyebrow at his companion, questioning, waiting for an answer.

"Easily. Through the Root network I got as much information as I needed. You are quite well known amongst them, after all. Oh, don't be surprised," Sai's companion continued, waving a hand dismissively. "I was once a Konoha mission, myself, and I had my connections into Roots's system. AS for why you won't kill me. You haven't yet, have you? Yet you've had plenty of opportunities. I have a feeling you want to complete this mission as much as I do, no?"

Sai closed his eyes and shifted them sideways, weighing his options. The man before him spoke the truth, Sai wanted nothing more than to do exactly what had been assigned him, as if he had been reading his mind.

"You are correct. I want to make a mark on this world, in this village. I shan't let myself be forgotten amongst the pages of time like my idiot brother. I'll do it, I will kill the Fifth Hokage, Tsunade-hime."

Kabuto smirked under his hooded cloak. "Good boy, Sai. Now, go, make your mark in history."

how's that?

Ok Unk Works for now.

yay ^.^ Glad you liked it ^.^

Kabuto smirked under his hooded cloak. "Good boy, Sai. Now, go, make your mark in history."

I still love that line. ^_^

UnknownMarauder wrote:yay ^.^ Glad you liked it ^.^

What next? I have spent all my time making new avas for the deal.

I was thinking from here we had Sai's point of view as he fought and killed Tsunade...But that was just me.

To bad we can't make this into a manga it'd be so much more awesome

Yeah. That would be awesome.

I was also thinking about going to Sai's PoV. It would make a lot more sense that way.

UnknownMarauder wrote:Yeah. That would be awesome.

I was also thinking about going to Sai's PoV. It would make a lot more sense that way.

Righto.

After that I would say we explain Kabuto's view as he left the village as everyone ran around in chaos trying to figure out what they just did and he meets Sai at the gate as they leave Konoha, but I was just conjecturing.

*nod* Alrighty then.

UnknownMarauder wrote:*nod* Alrighty then.

Speak up if you disagree.

I am not really sure where to go from here anyway.

But the good news is I just found the jackpot in Kabuto material.

ooh. Whaddya find?

Youtube...

But nevermind that ^_^

Ok so what do you think we should do next?

Well, I'm just about to type up the ideas we have and revise the opening a little. Maybe, just for a little, we have some random ninja, maybe Naruto's point of view stuck in there as the whole of Konoha discovers Tsunade's corpse.

just a thought, though.

Aye I like the random ninja idea...

Oh let's use that guy with the toothpick in his mouth from the Chuunin Exam he is tight!

he is cool. Alright. I'll have everything typed up and send it to you in a PM, kay?

If you like it, if not change it up feel free. And if ya want me to type some I can too.

I sent you the first bit. Sorry it took so long to get typed T.T

It's no problem at all I wasn't even online...

But ya have to resend it cause I didn't get the message...

resent. I hope you like it. I added more detail to the intro bit.

Mhm it needed more, possibly still does.

Alright now we need to move onto the next scene, and that would be the battle between Sai and Tsunade.

I think each of them should also bring a new jutsu to the table, and we should add old jutsus.

So it seems I will have to do my research ^_^

Lol there's not much on Wikipedia about Sai's jutsus, I already looked. What new jutsus should ther be?

That's the point he hardly has any, and every battle someone introduces a new jutsu especially people like Sai who we hardly know anything about.

Well, it has to be art based, if anything, same with Tsunade's new jutsu beign medical. Maybe an attack where Sai can create a landscape with his drawings?

A landscape....I like it ^_^

A landscape would be awesome, but maybe, with his art he can create another dimension.

Before ya say HEY HEY WOAH Q You are crazy! Remember Itachi Uchiha and Orochimaru also both suceeded in creating other dimensions and it's questionable that Yondaime and the Kyuubi's cage might be others too. So it's not so off base that it couldn't happen.