Poetry Thread

Im so scared
Im barely even breathing
My palms are bleeding
take me away
I feel No pain
Why am i here
who am i
Who do i love
who do i feel
why am i so scared
why am i shaking
I feel so alone
Take me away
Let me spread my wings
Take me away
Just kill me now

thats beautiful seshi.

Fear my Emo poetry of DOOM

gaaraluvr wrote:thats beautiful seshi.

I'm sorry, but are you serious?

Seshi take noffense here, but I didn't care for it at all.

Sorry ^_^

Click the link to my website in my profile or on the bottom of this post. That leads to my poetry on LJ

quater wrote:

gaaraluvr wrote:thats beautiful seshi.

I'm sorry, but are you serious?

Seshi take noffense here, but I didn't care for it at all.

Sorry ^_^

honestly i thikn i suck
so i dont care

My favorite one from that site

I am giving it to you
My soul, my love, my life
It is all yours

Do with me as you wish
Tear my heart in two
Crush my soul between your fingers
End my life when you see fit

I will not deny it
I have hurt you
I have hurt you more than anyone can be hurt
So with this, i shall give my vow

"May your hand strike me
May your love smite me
Lay your hands across my throat and kill me
As long as its by you
I shall die a happy man
But, i shall not give up hope that one day
You and i can be together once more
Until then, i shall wait
Even though im not yours
My heart, is in your hands
My soul, is at your mercy
My life is in your hands
Either love me, or smite me
All is up to you, and all is your choice"

wow u all write such good poetry i only no 1 poem and its not like wat u guys have

hey c-me tell us ur poem

Cute avatars C-me and anti lol

C-me's looks like a character from super gals...

lol ya i found this site thing lol

o and here is a comedy poem i worte lol
its supposed to be on a card to ur skool teacher so just go with it

Roses are red
Voilets are not grey
I gave u this card
Now u give me and A

LOLs.
Who said poems had to be serious?

C-me-ninja wrote:o and here is a comedy poem i worte lol
its supposed to be on a card to ur skool teacher so just go with it

Roses are red
Voilets are now grey
I gave u this card
Now u give me and A

I think that is the best poem I have ever heard in my long life!
A+ if I was your teacher but well,...you know you misspelled voilets. Uh-Oh, F



(WOW, that was wicked)

ya i told my bro that he actually wrote it to his teacher and he got a D- lol

C-me-ninja wrote:ya i told my bro that he actually wrote it to his teacher and he got a D- lol

That teacher was quite out of it. How dopey.

I would have given him an A, geez. Evil way to lay down the law!

ya she didn't like him lol

This is a poem that i had writen a while ago (close to a year) and i wanted to know what other people thought.



"Her dark green eyes,


Deep and fathomless the ocean itself could not compare.


Her shining smooth hair,


Softer than a cloud.


Smooth sensuous skin,


Warm and soft like a bed of silk.


Fields of flowers could not compare,


To the smell of her in a breeze.


One smile of her lips,


Is enough to make my heart melt.


Just hearing her soothing voice,


Is enough to make me hypnotized.


One touch of her smooth skin,


Makes a shiver crawl down my back.


Just one kiss,

Makes me hers forever."

omg that is sooo cute i think its really good^^

thanks

i gots a new poem(not comedy it was for my bf)

I love you
How do i know its true
I know because i look in your eyes
I feel as though i could fly
I touch your hand
I know now that i can
I know now of what it is to love
It is true
It is for only you
I love you

.... deep......
and in case you don't know..... men cannot express their emotions...... it's a guy thing

my bf is differnet honestly

then good for you... they don't come along very often...

lol true true so any1 got anything new?