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WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q
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- Post n°176
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lol...sorry dude...but ur the best fit to tell her....but nobody else....i think i could get a suprize with the identity of oni.....
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- Post n°177
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is there gonna be a new chapter
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- Post n°178
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i juss posted it on the last page....as i get more time on my comp i'll start writing again
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- Post n°179
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having cp troubles...
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- Post n°180
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yea a little......
NEW CHAPTER IS ON PAGE 7 EVERYBODY!!!!
NEW CHAPTER IS ON PAGE 7 EVERYBODY!!!!
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- Post n°181
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Choushi wrote:NEW CHAPTER....
chapter 6:revenge
Q:
*at the verge of tears* they....they were only genin...
Oni & Choushi:
THE GENIN!?!?!?!?
oni:
that monster..killing young genin like that....
Choushi:
lets get him..oni
oni:
WHAT?! we cant fight a shinobi like that
Choushi:
i
know he's powerful...but we gotta try *tearing up* u dont remember
oni??? they were kids...kids with dreams...kids that wanted to help
their country
Oni:
i know...i know
*flash back*
genin 1:
ONI SAMA...I'm tired
oni:
*looks back at the struggling genin...he is carrying loads of Equipment on his back.* hold up everybody...
choushi:
*stops* whats up oni..
oni:
dont
you realize...these genin arent normal genin...you see we were taught
to be balenced...to know taijutsu, genjutsu, and ninjutusu...these
genin here...are all specialized in one area.
Choushi:
*looks at the bunch* oh i see what you mean....*points at genin with a great physique* so he...is a main taijutsu user....
genin 2:
Hai
oni:
*points at another genin* her...shes a medical nin...
Genin 3:
hai
choushi:
that last kid...in the back...why does he carry everybody elses bags??
Genin 1:
Choushi-sama *attempts to bow but almost falls he is so tired* i am the weapons specialist......
oni:
so all those bags...they're yours??
Genin 1 :
yes sir...
choushi:
so they were taught just in one area....because if they were taught our way...it would take too long....
oni:
so u guys are ready to fight
all genin:
hai oni sama...
oni:
but dont you have families?? dont you have something to live for??
Genin 3:
well
oni sama....we want to have experience in the battlefield so that some
day we can be like you.....an anbu...we all want to become the national
protectors of the sand....
*flashback ends*
oni:
lets go
choushi:
are you ready
oni:
they
wanted to be like us choushi...they wanted to share their dreams with
us...we cannot let their memory be defiled by our cowardice...we have
to get revenge
*fades out to the distance where titan is*
Titan:
*looks at the bodies* hmph...pitiful....what does the sand take me for..a fool??? time to finish this....Shadow manipulation!!!
*from the darkness two arms made of shadows appear*
GO!!!
*thrusts his arms and the shadow arms do the same...*
*goes back to the sands army*
Q:
MEN THE TIME IS NOW.....CHARGE!!!!!
army:
*loud screams of anger* A:LFGKJOPEIWJKGJNLSKJWEROPIJSRRRRGGGHA
*runs twoard titan*
Q:
oni, choushi...
*both appear*
Choushi & oni:
yes, Q sama??
Q:
im so sorry....the genin didnt stand a chance...but maybe our numbers will give us the advantage *looks out to the battlefield.*
*on the battle field the two shadow arms are cutting, slashing and tearing apart the army*
Q:
RETREAT?!?!!?!!?!?
*the
army is now down to a small number...the small number are all injured
and start racing back....the shadow arms pick up two more and bury them
in the clouds up above*
*after the shadow arms come for Q.*
Q:
SAND WALL!! *a sand wall comes up from the ground behind the small army to protect them...the shadow arms still come for Q...
oni:
*takes
out sword* time for our revenge*takes out sword*lets go choushi *flash
steps on the ledge as Q has the sand follow oni as he flash steps so he
can stay airborne*
choushi:
ok oni...
HOUSEI!!!
*the two titanium pipes are released and increse in size as choushi grabs them*
jin:
choushi...go...i'll watch Q-sama
Choushi:
*bows* hai jin-sama *jumps off ledge onto the sand wall
oni:
*close to the shadow arm*
GRRAAAGHAAA *slashes the shadow arm..it falls down limp*
choushi:
SONIC BOOM!!!
*a wave of sound sclices the other shadow arm it too falls limp*
oni:
that was too easy....*looks out to the distance at titan* hes not going for the army anymore?!? he's going for.....Q SAMA!!!
*the pieces of the shadow arms connect together and shoot straight for the kazekage...and both hit him with clinched fists*
oni, choushi and jin:
KAZEKAGE-SAMA
*oni
jumps from the sand tower onto the sand wall pulling out both
swords...and sending wind bursts at both arms...cutting them in half
again.*
jin:
you will not harm the kazekage
*Q is in the sand tower knocked out cold*
choushi:
oni...get over here
oni:
*flash steps to choushi* yea???..
choushi:
we cant beat those shadow....things by just hitting them...we have to go to the source...
oni:
but the kazekage will be dead by the time we get there....he's like four miles away
choushi:
dont worry...i made a new jutsu just for an occasion like this...
SOUND TELEPORTATION!!!
hang on oni
*both their bodies dissolve*
*FADES OUT*
jose:
OH SO YOU THOUGHT YOU WERE GOOD?? well ur good for genin...but for the job i need you for...not even close
spyke:
wh...what are these
jose:
you are in my ice tombs...this is jagon...and this is my other jutsu..
RAINING ICE SHARDS!!!
*ice shards appear and shoot into the ice tombs*
kisame:
haha ur jutsu doesnt do anything...
jose:
it doesnt work?? or does it
*as the shards melt the water turns into purple liquid spewing into the ice tomb*
spyke:
thats....POISON!?!!?!?!?!
jose:
ur so smart spyke...haha..hahaha..lol..buwahhahahaha
ALL GENIN:
*screams of terror*
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhggggggggghhhhhaaa
*fades out*
*oni and choushi both appear in front of titan*
titan:
ooh a challenge...finally
choushi:
alright? you say nothing....*swings aori kane* SOUND MANIPULATION: FISTS OF FURY!!!
*transparent fists are made and thrusted foward at titan*
titan:
lol...*bring
arms up and simultaniously bringing up shadows engulfing the fist in
darkness* here...some of your own medicine..*blasts the darkness at
choushi...hitting him square in the eyes*
choushi:
AAAGGRRGARAFGRGAGARGRGRGARG *flys back covering eyes..hitting the ground*
oni:
CHOUSHI???
*looks at his fallen comrade..then back at titan* thats it *brings out
sword....pointing it at the sky the faint aura of a pheonix appears
over oni...oni's eyes glow a bluish red and his sword is covered in
flames also...* you ....you cannot kill many of my comrades and attempt
to assassinate the kazekage without unleashing the fury of the red
pheonix of the sand.....Oni...me...
titan:
ur full of bull...ur village is a bunch of *stabbed* uugh.....*falls onto his knees*
oni:
i will uphold my way of the ninja.
THIS IS THE NEWEST CHAPTER!!!!!!
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- Post n°182
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Giz I feel so weakly portrayed ^_^
JK.
Hey Choushi I would love to help with the next Chapter if you need any.
JK.
Hey Choushi I would love to help with the next Chapter if you need any.
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- Post n°183
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i thought so too...i'll help give you some more credit too Q-sama...
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- Post n°184
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c'mon Q......i did that purposely......dont worry everyone gets their battles.....just relax.....
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- Post n°185
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Aw, wow! No, really, I am kickas.
But who was the oni fool who stabbed me? I didn't get that....meh
But who was the oni fool who stabbed me? I didn't get that....meh
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- Post n°186
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Choushi wrote:c'mon Q......i did that purposely......dont worry everyone gets their battles.....just relax.....
I said JK....I was more curious about my name still being in the title.
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- Post n°188
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Choushi wrote:jose:
it doesnt work?? or does it
*as the shards melt the water turns into purple liquid spewing into the ice tomb*
spyke:
thats....POISON!?!!?!?!?!
jose:
ur so smart spyke...haha..hahaha..lol..buwahhahahaha
Lol. It's good Choushi. Keep it rolling.
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- Post n°189
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thanx mayn.......
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- Post n°190
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This is quite the comical Fanfic Choushi, i've been enjoying it thus far and can not wait for the next chapter.
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- Post n°191
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thanx endless....but for now...im gonna put this on a break for i am releasing another series..with renden....but i promise all my faithfull users.....there will b more chapters....pinky swear...lol
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- Post n°192
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Damn...I wanted more soon!!!
You better stick to the promise!!!
You better stick to the promise!!!
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YAY PROMISE!!
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Angelic Harmony wrote:Damn...I wanted more soon!!!
You better stick to the promise!!!
well u have WAY better ff buddy....and dont worry when the WOTN FF comes back it'll be bigger badder and better than ever.....thats another promise......
oh and jake.......promises are always fun to make bcuz it gives me something to work hard for to keep it.......
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Okay Choushi-kun!!!
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- Post n°196
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hey i have an idea....next chapter i write......i'll PM it to u...and you can revise it....hmmm???? but im not gonna give u the whole chapter.....that would ruin the suprises i have in store....
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Surprise...Nya, sounds so awsome!
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yup.....and if i have enough time...and u 2.....we could write 1........i love writing....so if u have an idea anytime....i'll write or do whatever i can to help
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Nya, writing is my life ^___^ That seems like a cool idea! You are an awsome write Choushi-kun! Charm is a fan of the writing!
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and im a fan of yours.....you have a captivating way of writing......