WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

thats wat i was planning do u have an alternative name
cuz yondaime doesnt work

new chapter is UP!!!!!!!!! not that great though

I kinda liked it.

thanx Q

the background of the shadow ninja is cool and interesting.

why're you not sending me the stories so i can fix them up???and why'd it go chapter 1, 2 ,3 ,4 ,7???

cuz there are lost chapters in my mind................jk actually idk

Lols getting rly confused by choushi's comment

hey everybody

Hello

hey yall.....new chapter............not that great but yea

i give it an 8, choushi.

ok new name is germanpowerhouse
if thats too long, use ichigo

...ooo....

bummer. i don't think im going to be in it

i think i should tho. nah just kidding.

its good tho

deathy, shut up with your "i suck at writing" crap.. -0-;;


you make me feel bad


anyways.. its good, just reallly long..

chapter 6:revenge
Q:
*at the verge of tears* they....they were only genin...

Oni & Choushi:
THE GENIN!?!?!?!?

oni:
that monster..killing young genin like that....

Choushi:
lets get him..oni

oni:
WHAT?! we cant fight a shinobi like that

Choushi:
i
know he's powerful...but we gotta try *tearing up* u dont remember
oni??? they were kids...kids with dreams...kids that wanted to help
their country

Oni:
i know...i know

*flash back*

genin 1:
ONI SAMA...I'm tired

oni:
*looks back at the struggling genin...he is carrying loads of Equipment on his back.* hold up everybody...

choushi:
*stops* whats up oni..

oni:
dont
you realize...these genin arent normal genin...you see we were taught
to be balenced...to know taijutsu, genjutsu, and ninjutusu...these
genin here...are all specialized in one area.

Choushi:
*looks at the bunch* oh i see what you mean....*points at genin with a great physique* so he...is a main taijutsu user....

genin 2:
Hai

oni:
*points at another genin* her...shes a medical nin...

Genin 3:
hai

choushi:
that last kid...in the back...why does he carry everybody elses bags??

Genin 1:
Choushi-sama *attempts to bow but almost falls he is so tired* i am the weapons specialist......

oni:
so all those bags...they're yours??

Genin 1 :
yes sir...

choushi:
so they were taught just in one area....because if they were taught our way...it would take too long....

oni:
so u guys are ready to fight

all genin:
hai oni sama...

oni:
but dont you have families?? dont you have something to live for??

Genin 3:
well
oni sama....we want to have experience in the battlefield so that some
day we can be like you.....an anbu...we all want to become the national
protectors of the sand....

*flashback ends*

oni:
lets go

choushi:
are you ready

oni:
they
wanted to be like us choushi...they wanted to share their dreams with
us...we cannot let their memory be defiled by our cowardice...we have
to get revenge

*fades out to the distance where titan is*

Titan:
*looks at the bodies* hmph...pitiful....what does the sand take me for..a fool??? time to finish this....Shadow manipulation!!!
*from the darkness two arms made of shadows appear*
GO!!!
*thrusts his arms and the shadow arms do the same...*

*goes back to the sands army*

Q:
MEN THE TIME IS NOW.....CHARGE!!!!!

army:
*loud screams of anger* A:LFGKJOPEIWJKGJNLSKJWEROPIJSRRRRGGGHA
*runs twoard titan*

Q:
oni, choushi...

*both appear*

Choushi & oni:
yes, Q sama??

Q:
im so sorry....the genin didnt stand a chance...but maybe our numbers will give us the advantage *looks out to the battlefield.*

*on the battle field the two shadow arms are cutting, slashing and tearing apart the army*

Q:
RETREAT?!?!!?!!?!?

*the
army is now down to a small number...the small number are all injured
and start racing back....the shadow arms pick up two more and bury them
in the clouds up above*

*after the shadow arms come for Q.*

Q:
SAND WALL!! *a sand wall comes up from the ground behind the small army to protect them...the shadow arms still come for Q...

oni:
*takes
out sword* time for our revenge*takes out sword*lets go choushi *flash
steps on the ledge as Q has the sand follow oni as he flash steps so he
can stay airborne*

choushi:
ok oni...
HOUSEI!!!
*the two titanium pipes are released and increse in size as choushi grabs them*

jin:
choushi...go...i'll watch Q-sama

Choushi:
*bows* hai jin-sama *jumps off ledge onto the sand wall

oni:
*close to the shadow arm*
GRRAAAGHAAA *slashes the shadow arm..it falls down limp*

choushi:
SONIC BOOM!!!
*a wave of sound sclices the other shadow arm it too falls limp*

oni:
that was too easy....*looks out to the distance at titan* hes not going for the army anymore?!? he's going for.....Q SAMA!!!

*the pieces of the shadow arms connect together and shoot straight for the kazekage...and both hit him with clinched fists*

oni, choushi and jin:
KAZEKAGE-SAMA

*oni
jumps from the sand tower onto the sand wall pulling out both
swords...and sending wind bursts at both arms...cutting them in half
again.*
jin:
you will not harm the kazekage

*Q is in the sand tower knocked out cold*

choushi:
oni...get over here

oni:
*flash steps to choushi* yea???..

choushi:
we cant beat those shadow....things by just hitting them...we have to go to the source...

oni:
but the kazekage will be dead by the time we get there....he's like four miles away

choushi:
dont worry...i made a new jutsu just for an occasion like this...
SOUND TELEPORTATION!!!
hang on oni
*both their bodies dissolve*

*FADES OUT*

jose:
OH SO YOU THOUGHT YOU WERE GOOD?? well ur good for genin...but for the job i need you for...not even close

spyke:
wh...what are these

jose:
you are in my ice tombs...this is jagon...and this is my other jutsu..
RAINING ICE SHARDS!!!
*ice shards appear and shoot into the ice tombs*

kisame:
haha ur jutsu doesnt do anything...

jose:
it doesnt work?? or does it
*as the shards melt the water turns into purple liquid spewing into the ice tomb*

spyke:
thats....POISON!?!!?!?!?!

jose:
ur so smart spyke...haha..hahaha..lol..buwahhahahaha

ALL GENIN:
*screams of terror*
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhggggggggghhhhhaaa

*fades out*

*oni and choushi both appear in front of titan*

titan:
ooh a challenge...finally

choushi:
alright? you say nothing....*swings aori kane* SOUND MANIPULATION: FISTS OF FURY!!!
*transparent fists are made and thrusted foward at titan*

titan:
lol...*bring
arms up and simultaniously bringing up shadows engulfing the fist in
darkness* here...some of your own medicine..*blasts the darkness at
choushi...hitting him square in the eyes*

choushi:
AAAGGRRGARAFGRGAGARGRGRGARG *flys back covering eyes..hitting the ground*

oni:
CHOUSHI???
*looks at his fallen comrade..then back at titan* thats it *brings out
sword....pointing it at the sky the faint aura of a pheonix appears
over oni...oni's eyes glow a bluish red and his sword is covered in
flames also...* you ....you cannot kill many of my comrades and attempt
to assassinate the kazekage without unleashing the fury of the red
pheonix of the sand.....Oni...me...

titan:
ur full of bull...ur village is a bunch of *stabbed* uugh.....*falls onto his knees*

oni:
i will uphold my way of the ninja.

Awesome!!! Who's Oni?

its a secret...ask renden...

ok^^

why ask me???that's just stupid...

cuz its funny...and i think ur best to tell her

plz tell me

fine...