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by In the span of time....History has always
repeated itself...what happened a thousand years ago...just may happen
tomorrow...we'll never know...so in a sense we must go backwards to go
fowards....we must go to the past to understand what may come in the
future....
It is dark....a total eclipse....his breaths are
slow and concentrated...because he knows he must stay calm....as he
lifts up his mask if reveals a face all to familiar to us...yet he has
a distinct scar over his right eye that throws us off...his eyes are
closed....all the better to see the enemy....he is the most legendary
Anbu of all time and originator of the makai clan....Oni...
Oni:
COME OUT AND FIGHT ME LIKE A REAL MAN!!!!
*another voice comes from the darkness in response*
Mystery man:
I am fighting like a real man....Im right in front of you
*oni
swings his kunai in front of himself in hope that he will connect...but
his energy was wasted as there was nobody in front of him...*
HAHAHAHAH!!!!
this is my domain...my...utopia...darkness...and you will now
experience the power of the dark....i have one question...
Oni:
WHAT!?!
mystery:
Are you afraid?
Oni:
no
mystery:
my shadows will crush you into dust....
*the
shadows draw in putting pressure on the unsuspecting shinobi...the
force is crushing and at first impact ribs are heard....being
broken....the mystery man laughs as he comes in for the kill....the
streak from his kunai is the only thing seen....running through Onis
body*
Oni:
you
must not know me...i am ONI...the first anbu of SUNA....and i am
destined to be the last...From the sand of the wind country i was
created..just like every other suna shinobi...but when i was created
part of my body was infused with the ashes of hell....you cannot defeat
me...no matter what jutsu you use.....because out of the ashes pheonixs
rise!!!!
*oni finally opens his eyes revealing a redish tone in his
eyes....it is revealed that he has a tattoo on his right arm....a
phoenix shape....it glows with a red tone also....this is his true
power*
*the light from oni's body outshines the darkness....it is so
powerful that even though the eclipse is still going on....it is as if
were daytime....*
*the mystery man is revealed and is blown away and
bursts into ashes as the power of light is too powerful for him....oni
is also in ahes...he sacrificed himself to win...to protect his
country....his anbu mask lays on top of his ashes...
SUDDENLY!!!
*out
of the ashes rises.....ONI!!! he looks exactly the same...but his scars
and injuries....are gone....he is renewed...and as he stands up....he
finds the ashes of his defeated foe and gathers them*
Oni:
this could be useful someday.......
*the man destined to be the first....and the last shinobi of suna.....renden.....the red pheonix of suna
*end of flashback*
*rendens eyes open with the same redish glow he had a century ago....*
Renden: THIS IS MY TRUE POWER!!!!!!!!
*rendens
body starts glowing making almost the whole whirpool country
illuminate....endless is helpless as he falls to his knees in front of
renden*
Renden: No more shadows bitch
*renden pulls out his sword....which is glowing red with all the chakra infused in it.......and puts it up to endless' neck*
renden: i have one last question....are you scared?
*as
renden gets ready to deliver the final blow he hears a faint scream from the shore
nearby....renden pulls his sword back and dissapears into the forest*
Jose:
you were a great friend ama..*as jose takes his last look at this cruel
world the sword held by his former comrade amateratsu...runs through
joses heart...jose lets out a scream of pain as he fades fast into
death*
Ama: it is done....i have killed the mizukage.....silver-sama shall be proud...i have gotten rid of this tyrant *a tear falls*
Claud: you've done it!! you are truly a hero
ama:*falls to his knees as the memories of Jose....his friend...his brother....hit him*
Claud:
what?....you killed this horrible man....you are a man of honor....a
man of nobility....dont take pity on this...this...piece of crap *kicks
the mizukages lifeless body* WHAT KINDA KAGE ARE YA!!!! HUH???
*more storm shinobi come and disrespect the limp corpse of JOSE*
ama: What have i done *ama looks up into the skies*
*flashback*
a few weeks earlier.....while on the boat to the whirlpool village
Jose: AMA!!!!
ama: yes sir?
Jose:
this may be the last time we speak formally..and i just want to tell
you...that...you...are like a brother to me...and as my brother...i
want you to look over the mist if i am to depart this Cruel world....
ama: i--i--i couldnt possibly
jose:
*wraps his arm around amas sholulder....* trust me...if i were to pick
somebody to succeed me...it would definitely be you....just
remember...whatever you do when i die....take my body (if its not in
pieces) and throw it into the ocean...i want to lie in the place where
i arose....the water..
ama: yes sir!!!
end of flashback
ama:*stands up* i must keep my promise...
*the storm shinobi all look at ama*
CMON AMA!!! LETS BLOW THIS JOINT!!!
ama:
NO!!!! LEAVE HIM ALONE *runs to the body and quickly picks it up...ama
runs to the edge and throws joses body into the ocean...just as he
wished*
*the storm shinobi all grab their swords....unseathing them....surround ama...
AMA: HONOR!!!!!!!!!! NOBILITY!!!!!!!! THIS IS MY WAY OF THE NINJA!!!!!!!!
*to be continued*
repeated itself...what happened a thousand years ago...just may happen
tomorrow...we'll never know...so in a sense we must go backwards to go
fowards....we must go to the past to understand what may come in the
future....
It is dark....a total eclipse....his breaths are
slow and concentrated...because he knows he must stay calm....as he
lifts up his mask if reveals a face all to familiar to us...yet he has
a distinct scar over his right eye that throws us off...his eyes are
closed....all the better to see the enemy....he is the most legendary
Anbu of all time and originator of the makai clan....Oni...
Oni:
COME OUT AND FIGHT ME LIKE A REAL MAN!!!!
*another voice comes from the darkness in response*
Mystery man:
I am fighting like a real man....Im right in front of you
*oni
swings his kunai in front of himself in hope that he will connect...but
his energy was wasted as there was nobody in front of him...*
HAHAHAHAH!!!!
this is my domain...my...utopia...darkness...and you will now
experience the power of the dark....i have one question...
Oni:
WHAT!?!
mystery:
Are you afraid?
Oni:
no
mystery:
my shadows will crush you into dust....
*the
shadows draw in putting pressure on the unsuspecting shinobi...the
force is crushing and at first impact ribs are heard....being
broken....the mystery man laughs as he comes in for the kill....the
streak from his kunai is the only thing seen....running through Onis
body*
Oni:
you
must not know me...i am ONI...the first anbu of SUNA....and i am
destined to be the last...From the sand of the wind country i was
created..just like every other suna shinobi...but when i was created
part of my body was infused with the ashes of hell....you cannot defeat
me...no matter what jutsu you use.....because out of the ashes pheonixs
rise!!!!
*oni finally opens his eyes revealing a redish tone in his
eyes....it is revealed that he has a tattoo on his right arm....a
phoenix shape....it glows with a red tone also....this is his true
power*
*the light from oni's body outshines the darkness....it is so
powerful that even though the eclipse is still going on....it is as if
were daytime....*
*the mystery man is revealed and is blown away and
bursts into ashes as the power of light is too powerful for him....oni
is also in ahes...he sacrificed himself to win...to protect his
country....his anbu mask lays on top of his ashes...
SUDDENLY!!!
*out
of the ashes rises.....ONI!!! he looks exactly the same...but his scars
and injuries....are gone....he is renewed...and as he stands up....he
finds the ashes of his defeated foe and gathers them*
Oni:
this could be useful someday.......
*the man destined to be the first....and the last shinobi of suna.....renden.....the red pheonix of suna
*end of flashback*
*rendens eyes open with the same redish glow he had a century ago....*
Renden: THIS IS MY TRUE POWER!!!!!!!!
*rendens
body starts glowing making almost the whole whirpool country
illuminate....endless is helpless as he falls to his knees in front of
renden*
Renden: No more shadows bitch
*renden pulls out his sword....which is glowing red with all the chakra infused in it.......and puts it up to endless' neck*
renden: i have one last question....are you scared?
*as
renden gets ready to deliver the final blow he hears a faint scream from the shore
nearby....renden pulls his sword back and dissapears into the forest*
Jose:
you were a great friend ama..*as jose takes his last look at this cruel
world the sword held by his former comrade amateratsu...runs through
joses heart...jose lets out a scream of pain as he fades fast into
death*
Ama: it is done....i have killed the mizukage.....silver-sama shall be proud...i have gotten rid of this tyrant *a tear falls*
Claud: you've done it!! you are truly a hero
ama:*falls to his knees as the memories of Jose....his friend...his brother....hit him*
Claud:
what?....you killed this horrible man....you are a man of honor....a
man of nobility....dont take pity on this...this...piece of crap *kicks
the mizukages lifeless body* WHAT KINDA KAGE ARE YA!!!! HUH???
*more storm shinobi come and disrespect the limp corpse of JOSE*
ama: What have i done *ama looks up into the skies*
*flashback*
a few weeks earlier.....while on the boat to the whirlpool village
Jose: AMA!!!!
ama: yes sir?
Jose:
this may be the last time we speak formally..and i just want to tell
you...that...you...are like a brother to me...and as my brother...i
want you to look over the mist if i am to depart this Cruel world....
ama: i--i--i couldnt possibly
jose:
*wraps his arm around amas sholulder....* trust me...if i were to pick
somebody to succeed me...it would definitely be you....just
remember...whatever you do when i die....take my body (if its not in
pieces) and throw it into the ocean...i want to lie in the place where
i arose....the water..
ama: yes sir!!!
end of flashback
ama:*stands up* i must keep my promise...
*the storm shinobi all look at ama*
CMON AMA!!! LETS BLOW THIS JOINT!!!
ama:
NO!!!! LEAVE HIM ALONE *runs to the body and quickly picks it up...ama
runs to the edge and throws joses body into the ocean...just as he
wished*
*the storm shinobi all grab their swords....unseathing them....surround ama...
AMA: HONOR!!!!!!!!!! NOBILITY!!!!!!!! THIS IS MY WAY OF THE NINJA!!!!!!!!
*to be continued*
yay!!!i got to post it for once!!!lolz...
