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    Broken Heart

    UchihaAyame
    UchihaAyame
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    Registration date : 2008-05-19

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    Post by UchihaAyame Wed Oct 01 2008, 02:34

    I wear my heart around my neck
    And look! Its broken
    Half A Dozen cracks and slits
    Its Bleeding, No! Crying
    Crying out for freedom
    A Heart that was once free
    Restrained by chains of autocracy
    A Dictatorial rule
    My heart, Our hearts
    Are like mirrors
    Be careful not to break
    If it breaks, its hard to fix
    If its numb
    its hard to love
    A veil of darkness covers my heart
    it builds up and darkens up my heart
    There's a tinted shade of black
    No one can come and peek
    They can't read me or what I'll do
    They will not see a thing
    Just darkness beyond our dreams


    I was really bored when I made this and I'm not good at doing poems YET. I'll come up with better ones...soon.Evil Plan
    PeinQAkatsuki
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    Post by PeinQAkatsuki Thu Oct 02 2008, 18:22

    Whoo! That's a good poem ^.^
    UchihaAyame
    UchihaAyame
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    Female
    Number of posts : 725
    Age : 29
    What's up Tab : I'm reading manga. Come on over and read with me!
    Fanclubs : Deidara FC,Tobi FC
    Village : Scorpion
    Happiness bar :
    Broken Heart Left_bar_bleue65 / 10065 / 100Broken Heart Right_bar_bleue

    Registration date : 2008-05-19

    AMP
    Natural: 10
    Power: 10
    Instinct: 10

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    Post by UchihaAyame Fri Oct 03 2008, 08:07

    Thanks~! Love
    PeinQAkatsuki
    PeinQAkatsuki
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    Number of posts : 27316
    Age : 29
    What's up Tab : Homie Purp && Homie Blue: Ghetto since 2009
    Broken Heart Ightning
    PeinQ & ThiCup: Non-photogenic buddies~ :D
    Fanclubs : Deidara FC, Kabuto FC, Jesus Freaks club, FMA FC, Tobi FC, Soul Eater FC :D, Death Note FC :D
    Village : Mockingbird
    Happiness bar :
    Broken Heart Left_bar_bleue100 / 100100 / 100Broken Heart Right_bar_bleue

    Registration date : 2008-01-25

    AMP
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    Post by PeinQAkatsuki Fri Oct 03 2008, 13:16

    ^.^ No problemo ^.^
    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Fri Oct 03 2008, 18:47

    cool poem ayame^^
    deidara_rocks_and_rulz49
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    Post by deidara_rocks_and_rulz49 Sat Oct 04 2008, 09:42

    Thats a really good poem Ayame ^^

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