what didn't care? its an ok poem
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- Post n°77
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Jaden
Everyone thinks that i'm happy
Truth is i'm not
I smile away the pain
Pretending that i'm fine
I feel as if i'm tied in chains
I dont cry
I dont wine
I always act happy
But when i'm alone
I cry,and cry
My wet tears stream down my face
As i sob in my room
Though when i go out
I put on a brave face
I grin and smile through the pain
I stand up
Wipe my eyes
I run out and yell"whats up?"
I live my way through all the lies
My teachers hate me
I'm insulted and worse
But can't u see
I feel like i'm liveing in a nightmare
The nightmare wont stop
But i have my Friends
people who care
people that love me
And i wouldn't change that
That wouldn't be fair
when i was wirteing this i was watching GX who u guys like it^^
Everyone thinks that i'm happy
Truth is i'm not
I smile away the pain
Pretending that i'm fine
I feel as if i'm tied in chains
I dont cry
I dont wine
I always act happy
But when i'm alone
I cry,and cry
My wet tears stream down my face
As i sob in my room
Though when i go out
I put on a brave face
I grin and smile through the pain
I stand up
Wipe my eyes
I run out and yell"whats up?"
I live my way through all the lies
My teachers hate me
I'm insulted and worse
But can't u see
I feel like i'm liveing in a nightmare
The nightmare wont stop
But i have my Friends
people who care
people that love me
And i wouldn't change that
That wouldn't be fair
when i was wirteing this i was watching GX who u guys like it^^
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- Post n°80
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I dont get the point of it and it doesnt have a reason. so its random.
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- Post n°81
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Temari wrote:I dont get the point of it and it doesnt have a reason. so its random.
it does its abut jaden:P
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- Post n°83
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heres mine
im getting irritated,
right now im so frustrated,
Im trying to get away,
dont know what else i can say,
right now my life just isnt fair,
i scream and yell but still no one cares,
i mostly wear black and red ,
i try to act like i am dead,
everyday i am just so alone,
my friends they never answer the phone
im getting irritated,
right now im so frustrated,
Im trying to get away,
dont know what else i can say,
right now my life just isnt fair,
i scream and yell but still no one cares,
i mostly wear black and red ,
i try to act like i am dead,
everyday i am just so alone,
my friends they never answer the phone
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- Post n°87
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judai12 wrote:Depressed is midnight black
It sounds like breaking glass
It tastes like an over-ripe apple
It smells like a rotting cherry tree
Depressed feels like blood runnig down
mine hand.
like it?^^
Oh! I recognize that. We had to make a poem like that one time in Creative Writing!