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    Post by Angelic Harmony Wed Jan 09 2008, 16:24

    Okay, this is a story I wrote a while ago. If you don't like vampires, than don't read this. Renden, please, if you read this, don't comment about that's not a vampires weakness or whatever, okay -______- It's my story. Butt out.
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    Name: Wish Sparum
    Age: 14 (You notice that all vampire people are so old. Like 16-18. Somtimes 15, but I want it to be totally different.)
    Height: 5'7

    She is an avrerage mortal girl. Average in being that she's human. Different in being she's her own person. See, Wish is not to say gothic or emo, but more like she loves dark colors. Black and red being her favorite of the rest. She never forgets to wear her black choker with a red rose hanging off of it. She has mid-back length, pitch black hair. She died her two strips of hair in the front red. Her eyes are the most intresting about her. The deep red that they are. No one can explain why they are like that, only that she is different and should be labled as a 'freak'. At least that's what the kids say about her.

    Wish excludes herself from the world. She counts herself as independent, not relying on others to do what she already can. She has no family. Wish lives by herself in a large cabin out in the woods. That's how she become an outcast. Her mother, beautiful as ever, died in a tragic car accident on her 12th birthday. It was raining badly and she went out to get Wish's cake when a truck came out of nowhere from behind speeding, and crashed behind her, spinning her off the road and into a tree nearby. Her dad, a drunkie, just up and left after that. Leaving Wish alone forever. Her grandparents want nothing to do with her since her mother's death. It reminds them to much of thir daughter. That is because Wish looks so much like her. (Except the eyes.)

    Wish is also muted. She dosn't say a word to anybody. Even in school, the teachers try so hard to help her speak, but it is she who can only force herself to, and not to. She is a bright girl, but struggling because of her past. She attends a private school, where you have to wear uniforms. See, the girls skirts are really short and it bothers her. Even though she is so pretty, and her body is marvelous, she dosn't accept it. So she wears the boys unform until she ends up home, where she changes into her dark clothes and strolls around in the woods. It's a common routine for her. That is until her life changes forever when she meets a boy who teaches her that being different can be good and bad. And when she meets his family, what will she think?

    And, she still hasn't discovered the secret about herself fully. What powers lie behind this quiet, peacful girl? Powers only she can control with the help of a vampire. The 'curse' of her family.

    - - - - - - - - - -

    ~::~Vampire Info~::~
    Name:Darian Frill
    Age:250 looks 17
    Height: 6'1

    Now see Darian is of course rich. He is also very powerful throughout the whole vampire population. Darian's family is the top house to all vampires. His father was the most powerful ever and now his big brother, Blaze, is in command. Now it's not that Darian and Blaze don't get along but they are in competition. Darian wanted to be leader of the vampire clan since he was little, but it goes in order by age on whether you are allowed to be throned king. Blaze just happened to be 100years older then Darian making him look 18-19yrs old. Darian has black hair that goes down to his cheek's and it's like an emo hair cut. (I love that style, makes them look so hott. Anyway...)He has violet eyes that are so beautiful. Darian's strength is even to his brothers and he is really fast.

    Darian's father, the once before king, died from the sunlight. Trying to protect Elsie, Darian's stepmother. She's human. His dad always had a hint thing for human girls. No one knows why and no one bothered to ask him if he's crazy. He went against the rules of having a baby with her. Rainasha(Rain-a-sha). Now Darian despises his little sister, the halfling and all humans. He can't stand his stepmom either. Blaze on the other hand feels sorry for them, even though Blaze is a powerful killer and dosn't like humans either,(Not as much as his Darian though) he let them stay like they were family. Darian didn't like that so he moved out and now is living on his own in a mansion not too far away from Wish.

    Darian has a little tempermental problem. He is very handsome though and can be gental and nice at times when he wants to. He dosn't like people getting close to him. He prefers to speak his mind and not afraid to tell people off or boss them around. He isn't cold hearted, but he puts up a barrier that not many people can mealt. That is, until a certain girl;Wish, comes into the picture. Can she turn the barrier down and sink into his heart. Or will it be fatle and cause her pain if he rejects her like everyone else has because of her difference? And can he help her, with discovering her power, and what lies beyond of what he has to do to help her control it and accept the 'curse'.

    - - - - - - - - - -

    Okay, now i'm going to give a little info on Blaze, and Rainasha.
    First- - -
    Name: Blaze Frill
    Age: 350 looks 18 or 19
    Height: 6'3

    Head of the vampire clan. Competes with his brother as often as he can. Has Dark brown hair and light green eyes that glow when he's mad. Blaze has the same strength of his brother and is proud of Darian. They are really close, but for the fact that his little sister Rainasha and his stepmom used live with him, he barely see's Darian now. But he's okay with that. Blaze loves Rainasha because it's his sister and he's teaching her how to be like a full vampire even though she's half. But it's better to have a halfling that strong and related to you then one that is weak and related to you. Blaze is a kickass fighter. He knows alot of marial arts and repects every vampire in his clan, He has responsibilitis to the clan to take care of enemies and traitors. He is very handsome, yet very pale like all vampire's should be. Even little Rainasha is pale like one should be.

    Blaze has a good attitude but can change very unexpectedly. If you ask him too many questions or don't respect him, you'll surely pay. He hates humans too, those not in his family. And the only one is his stepmom, so all others are not welcomed to him.

    ~::~Now for Rainasha~::~
    Name: Rainasha-Rain for short
    Age:160 looks 12
    Height: 5'2

    Rain is a very hyper girl. She loves to follow her brother Blaze around and help him with his work. She loves training with him and he's always taking good care of her. Rain knows that her brother Darian dosn't like her very much but she can live on.Se is trying to prove to him one day that he'll except her for what she is and who she is if she can prove it to him. That is her main goal. She can walk out in sunlight but not for too long or it will start burning her. Rainasha looks like her dad mostly. She is very pale and has dark drown hair that goes a little below her shoulders. She has grey eyes that sparkle when she laughs. She loves to train of course, but drawing is her other main life line for her.

    Rain is always so sweet, to everyone around her. She makes people smile even though they are so depressed. That's the main reason why Blaze loves being around her.

    Done with info. Hope you guys enjoy chapter 1.

    Ohhh I forgot to tell. Of course Rainasha's mom is dead since she's 160. Her mom died of old age. Just to tell you. Bye!
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    Post by Kiami Wed Jan 09 2008, 17:43

    o.O You had to post that story!? Why didn't you put the other one...I hated this one -.-;
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    Post by Choushi Thu Jan 10 2008, 01:45

    ouch.....it sounds good charm
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    Post by Angelic Harmony Thu Jan 10 2008, 01:48

    Ha! See Kia! It is good!

    Thanks Choushi-kun. It's me and Kia's work. She just dosnt like how it came out.
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    Post by Choushi Thu Jan 10 2008, 01:59

    oh....i c......
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    Post by unicornholly Thu Mar 19 2009, 20:35

    Angelic Harmony wrote:Okay, this is a story I wrote a while ago. If you don't like vampires, than don't read this. Renden, please, if you read this, don't comment about that's not a vampires weakness or whatever, okay -______- It's my story. Butt out.
    - - - - - - - - - -

    Name: Wish Sparum
    Age: 14 (You notice that all vampire people are so old. Like 16-18. Somtimes 15, but I want it to be totally different.)
    Height: 5'7

    She is an avrerage mortal girl. Average in being that she's human. Different in being she's her own person. See, Wish is not to say gothic or emo, but more like she loves dark colors. Black and red being her favorite of the rest. She never forgets to wear her black choker with a red rose hanging off of it. She has mid-back length, pitch black hair. She died her two strips of hair in the front red. Her eyes are the most intresting about her. The deep red that they are. No one can explain why they are like that, only that she is different and should be labled as a 'freak'. At least that's what the kids say about her.

    Wish excludes herself from the world. She counts herself as independent, not relying on others to do what she already can. She has no family. Wish lives by herself in a large cabin out in the woods. That's how she become an outcast. Her mother, beautiful as ever, died in a tragic car accident on her 12th birthday. It was raining badly and she went out to get Wish's cake when a truck came out of nowhere from behind speeding, and crashed behind her, spinning her off the road and into a tree nearby. Her dad, a drunkie, just up and left after that. Leaving Wish alone forever. Her grandparents want nothing to do with her since her mother's death. It reminds them to much of thir daughter. That is because Wish looks so much like her. (Except the eyes.)

    Wish is also muted. She dosn't say a word to anybody. Even in school, the teachers try so hard to help her speak, but it is she who can only force herself to, and not to. She is a bright girl, but struggling because of her past. She attends a private school, where you have to wear uniforms. See, the girls skirts are really short and it bothers her. Even though she is so pretty, and her body is marvelous, she dosn't accept it. So she wears the boys unform until she ends up home, where she changes into her dark clothes and strolls around in the woods. It's a common routine for her. That is until her life changes forever when she meets a boy who teaches her that being different can be good and bad. And when she meets his family, what will she think?

    And, she still hasn't discovered the secret about herself fully. What powers lie behind this quiet, peacful girl? Powers only she can control with the help of a vampire. The 'curse' of her family.

    - - - - - - - - - -

    ~::~Vampire Info~::~
    Name:Darian Frill
    Age:250 looks 17
    Height: 6'1

    Now see Darian is of course rich. He is also very powerful throughout the whole vampire population. Darian's family is the top house to all vampires. His father was the most powerful ever and now his big brother, Blaze, is in command. Now it's not that Darian and Blaze don't get along but they are in competition. Darian wanted to be leader of the vampire clan since he was little, but it goes in order by age on whether you are allowed to be throned king. Blaze just happened to be 100years older then Darian making him look 18-19yrs old. Darian has black hair that goes down to his cheek's and it's like an emo hair cut. (I love that style, makes them look so hott. Anyway...)He has violet eyes that are so beautiful. Darian's strength is even to his brothers and he is really fast.

    Darian's father, the once before king, died from the sunlight. Trying to protect Elsie, Darian's stepmother. She's human. His dad always had a hint thing for human girls. No one knows why and no one bothered to ask him if he's crazy. He went against the rules of having a baby with her. Rainasha(Rain-a-sha). Now Darian despises his little sister, the halfling and all humans. He can't stand his stepmom either. Blaze on the other hand feels sorry for them, even though Blaze is a powerful killer and dosn't like humans either,(Not as much as his Darian though) he let them stay like they were family. Darian didn't like that so he moved out and now is living on his own in a mansion not too far away from Wish.

    Darian has a little tempermental problem. He is very handsome though and can be gental and nice at times when he wants to. He dosn't like people getting close to him. He prefers to speak his mind and not afraid to tell people off or boss them around. He isn't cold hearted, but he puts up a barrier that not many people can mealt. That is, until a certain girl;Wish, comes into the picture. Can she turn the barrier down and sink into his heart. Or will it be fatle and cause her pain if he rejects her like everyone else has because of her difference? And can he help her, with discovering her power, and what lies beyond of what he has to do to help her control it and accept the 'curse'.

    - - - - - - - - - -

    Okay, now i'm going to give a little info on Blaze, and Rainasha.
    First- - -
    Name: Blaze Frill
    Age: 350 looks 18 or 19
    Height: 6'3

    Head of the vampire clan. Competes with his brother as often as he can. Has Dark brown hair and light green eyes that glow when he's mad. Blaze has the same strength of his brother and is proud of Darian. They are really close, but for the fact that his little sister Rainasha and his stepmom used live with him, he barely see's Darian now. But he's okay with that. Blaze loves Rainasha because it's his sister and he's teaching her how to be like a full vampire even though she's half. But it's better to have a halfling that strong and related to you then one that is weak and related to you. Blaze is a kickass fighter. He knows alot of marial arts and repects every vampire in his clan, He has responsibilitis to the clan to take care of enemies and traitors. He is very handsome, yet very pale like all vampire's should be. Even little Rainasha is pale like one should be.

    Blaze has a good attitude but can change very unexpectedly. If you ask him too many questions or don't respect him, you'll surely pay. He hates humans too, those not in his family. And the only one is his stepmom, so all others are not welcomed to him.

    ~::~Now for Rainasha~::~
    Name: Rainasha-Rain for short
    Age:160 looks 12
    Height: 5'2

    Rain is a very hyper girl. She loves to follow her brother Blaze around and help him with his work. She loves training with him and he's always taking good care of her. Rain knows that her brother Darian dosn't like her very much but she can live on.Se is trying to prove to him one day that he'll except her for what she is and who she is if she can prove it to him. That is her main goal. She can walk out in sunlight but not for too long or it will start burning her. Rainasha looks like her dad mostly. She is very pale and has dark drown hair that goes a little below her shoulders. She has grey eyes that sparkle when she laughs. She loves to train of course, but drawing is her other main life line for her.

    Rain is always so sweet, to everyone around her. She makes people smile even though they are so depressed. That's the main reason why Blaze loves being around her.

    Done with info. Hope you guys enjoy chapter 1.

    Ohhh I forgot to tell. Of course Rainasha's mom is dead since she's 160. Her mom died of old age. Just to tell you. Bye!
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    Post by D-Dei Wed May 13 2009, 17:36

    "Darian has black hair that goes down to his cheek's and it's like an emo hair cut. (I love that style, makes them look so hott. Anyway...)"

    Wow, Charm.
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    Post by judai12 Wed May 13 2009, 20:01

    its really good^^
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    Post by KarateKeyaQ Sat Jun 06 2009, 09:55

    Where's Chapter one? o_O
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    Post by Angelic Harmony Sun Jun 21 2009, 22:51

    http://member.mibba.com/102941/stories/

    There. O:
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    Post by KarateKeyaQ Mon Jun 22 2009, 21:42

    CHARM!
    Oh awesomeness xDD

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