Kabuto (Possible Spoilers)

Then I think we should write the next scene, till we come up with moe. What you think?

Yeah. That sounds like a good idea.

Alright then...

Umm...What's it about?

Next scene was the mini interlude where the village finds Shizune murdered and Tsunade gone, presumed dead. That's also the bit where Genma and Shino accept the A-ranked mission. But we should probably put a bit in about the monster battle.

I know what we could do, *Sorry I am taking your idea and finalizing it*

Genma walks up to Shino, says hey thanks for helping us battle that monster last night, we still have no clue what that was or where it came from it just sprang out and then disappeared again. It's chakra, so incredible. Then he says you have a mission to see the Village Elders, and along the way maybe he will say hi to Kotetsu and Izumi and also he might see Hinata's sister. Like I said I think it'd be cool if we used them. Also this guy might be somewhere as well. Lastly maybe Aoba too.

By the way I am just saying these names because they are cool side characters, that if you wanted we could bring in later for shino to work with, however if you disagree I am cool with that I understand. Just brainstorming. So anyway Shino goes to the Elders, being the only Chuunin in the village that wasn't to badly injured by the monster, and being one of the few that successfully fought the night before they send him on his own to see if he can track down information on the monster.

Heh. I like Aoba's sunglasses. That sounds okay to me, actually. It introduces the main characters, giving them all reason for being there.

UnknownMarauder wrote:Heh. I like Aoba's sunglasses. That sounds okay to me, actually. It introduces the main characters, giving them all reason for being there.

Mhm. Plus, just in case we do use Aoba, and the others later, it'd be good to know that we had already had them at some part of the story, ya know, so the reader isn't like what the freedom where did these guys come from?

And since it was because Kabuto destroyed a huge wall of the village it also is completely logical for them to be there, and it shows an introduction to the idea of him being a jinchurriki. To be honest I kinda love this intro ^_^

It is comming out good. We have reason to be proud of it ^.^

UnknownMarauder wrote:It is comming out good. We have reason to be proud of it ^.^

Yeah! We are awesome ^_^

Do you think it will do well with the fanfiction community?

I can't say for sure. I know there are tons of poeple out there always looking for new stuff, but then again, a lot of them are the oldfashioned type who don't like to stray too far from the regular fanbase statuses

UnknownMarauder wrote:I can't say for sure. I know there are tons of poeple out there always looking for new stuff, but then again, a lot of them are the oldfashioned type who don't like to stray too far from the regular fanbase statuses

Well, we definitely did that I believe ^_^

Well, if we get called out for being revolutionaries, hey at least we tried. I'd rather be a rebel then a traditionalist anyday, because rebels take the road of originality.

Besides, if nothing else our fanfic will have plot twists and unexpectability something they can never say they have ^_^

yeah ^.^ And, after all, the person who went and did all the things that created normal fanfiction today, they were revoluitionaries of thier time, too.

UnknownMarauder wrote:yeah ^.^ And, after all, the person who went and did all the things that created normal fanfiction today, they were revoluitionaries of thier time, too.

Word. If we have to turn the fanfic world upside down to get this accepted, all the better, I don't like fanfics anyway ^_^

So you want to write up our next, part, and then show it to me? Or what?

YEah. It may take me a little, though. But I'll get it written ^.^

Sweet, I know you will ^_^

^.^ I hope it comes out as good as the first bit. I'm really proud of how that came out

UnknownMarauder wrote:^.^ I hope it comes out as good as the first bit. I'm really proud of how that came out

I don't think ya ever showed it to me, unless ya mean that very original part.

I sent it to you in a PM, before you wrote the Sai vs. Tsunade battle

Ok. Just checking. Well get riding unk I want to read it as soon as ya do ^_^

well, I ahve to be off. I'll be back in an hour or so.

*Umm I meant to say writing...

lol it's okay. it's okay ^.^ I speak Typonese

So how's it going? ^_^

Going good ^.^ I hsould have the bit done before 10 tonight. (Yes, I know, four and a half hours, but I'm a slow typer >.>)

It's ok I can't wait to read it ^_^

Besides better slow and good then half an hour and bad like some people...

By the way I just realized, Naruto wont become a Chuunin ^_^