Need Some Opnions...

Yes indeedy!

My Village Has some awkward Missions...

Yeah I know defeat the Sand and mist nin...

And I suck at that...I couldn't beat an Acadamy Student T-T

Haha well practice fighting is kinda fun

I don't like training by myself but I train sometimes,I trained with Rasu-kun and I was going to train with Choushi but he had to go.

Not Training I mean have battles with someone and tell them it's just practice.

Ohhh...okay...haven't battled yet...DX I suck.

No you don't your not required to or anything it's just side fun

I know...Wow...my house is really really weird today...my sister came over,I gave my dogs a bath,my big brother HAS NOT beat the crap out of me,my mom hasn't yelled at me for sitting in my PJ's all day,I might go over to a friend's house today AND I got some crud done for school.

For everyone who said this was good:THANK YOU!!!! It has italics for thoughts and times...kinda...




Me and My Rival's Sister!Lovers?Friends?Or Rivals As Well?


Part 2:Naruto's Guest and The Accident

*Naruto's Point Of View*


I raced along the grass,following the Uchiha I had bet with,she was really fast...I was mad about earlier since she kinda glomped me."GET BACK HERE!!!"I shouted,"GET UP HERE!!!"She made her comeback.I growled,getting into the trees and following her,"You're not making tag much fun..."I heard her say,it echoed in the trees and I stopped;glancing around the surrounding area.

...After Dark...

*Still Naruto's Point Of View*

It was pitch black inside my house,we decided to continue the game the next morning,I got into the shower,sighing softly as the nice hot water soaked me.I got out drying off and dressing into my ramen-boxers,I went to my room and flopped over onto my bed,landing on a lump and getting a grunt."Usratonkatchi..."I heard a mutter,"Is that you,Atsuko??"I kind of recognized the voice."No,it's Pikachu."the voice replied sarcastically,moving the blanket and revealing the face of whom I asked.I rolled my eyes,"What're you doing in my room anyways?"she shrugged,"I don't feel like sleeping in the Hokage's office,so I broke into a random house."I shrugged as well,thinking,Why MY house...you're more annoying than Konohamaru...

*Atsuko's Point Of View*

We had established I was staying here for the night,I curled up in the blanket,receiving a disapproving grunt from Naruto,but who cares??NOT ME,I want to sleep in a room,not an office with a lock on my door and no windows,BUT A ROOM.Within minutes I was asleep and sprawled out on the bed,tails pointed in every dirention,hair askew on the pillow under my head and two limbs draped over Naruto.My right arm and leg were on his body,my leg over his stomach and my arm on his face.

*Naruto's Point Of View*

I scrunched my nose a little as her arm came down on my face,thumping my nose a little,I grunted as her leg dropped on my stomach.She was taking up the whole bed,I grabbed her leg forcefully shoving it to her other leg and I swung her arm back over her body so it was near the other.Something furry was bedraggled under the blanket,it was curled around my ankles and calves.I looked and saw animal tails,I rolled my eyes freeing my legs,I got out of the bed.I was about to walk out but a pillow was thrown at my head,making contact,I had an anime vein and turned around,"WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM?!?!?!?"I was in the p*ssed off anime stature."What's YOUR problem??"she was more stoic than me with the same question."YOU'RE THE ONE WHO THREW A PILLOW AT ME!!!"she stood on the bed,the same pose as me,on arm with a fist-bent,mind you- and white, angry eyes."YOU'RE THE ONE WHO WOKE ME UP!!!" she lunged and tackled me,we were wrestling on the floor throwing complaints and comebacks at one another.

...That Morning...

*Still Naruto's Point Of View*

~Dream~

I was passed out on the floor,I woke up to a kick in my side,"Wake up,Usratonkatchi..."I heard the dark voice of my old comrade(sp?)...Uchiha,Sasuke.I opened my eyes,blinking a few times,I pushed myself to my feet.There was a female's chuckle and it came from the same direction as the male Uchiha."Aniki-sama...Baka no Naru-chan?"whomever this chick was,she'd made it to my annoyed side,she had asked if I were an idiot...a girly idiot,she said chan,not kun like a boy's name...but chan...like a girl's name."Onee-sama...He's no idiot...he may be a loser,but he's not an idiot."the deeper Uchiha answered.He called this person his sister...Atsuko...I growled,"Sasuke!Where are you?!?!"I saw the two Uchihas step out of the darkness,I went to go punch Sasuke in the face,I was furious.He caught my fist,his lips curved into a smirk,"Rivals until the end..."

I woke up sweating a little,I sat up,on my bed,a weight from my stomach fell to my lap.I looked down and screamed,falling off my bed,"THERE'S A WOLF ON MY BED!!!!!!!"I spazzed out."Shut.Your.Trap."a scratchy female's voice chimed from the blankets.A wolf's head popped out of the blankets and it jumped onto my stomach.I had the wind knocked out of me,I grunted as the wolf's paws pushed off my stomach and thudded through the small hallway of my apartment room.I sat up and got into my clothes for the day,I walked downstairs seeing Atsuko jumping up and down."What's your malfunction?"I asked,half annoyed-half playfully mean,she glared a little then whined,still bouncing up and down.Her legs were tucked together,"I.HAVE.TO.PEE."she said each word solidly as she continued bouncing,"WHERES THE BATHROOM.I HAVE TO GO REALLY REALLY BADLY."I smirked,"It'll cost ya'..."she glared,"JUST WHERE'S YOUR BATHROOM?!?!?!?!!?!???!?!?!?!"she yelled,my smirk just grew."I said...It'll cost ya'..."I said slower,someone burst in."ATSUKO YOU IDIOT!!!!!!" It was the Godaime,Atsuko froze,a liquid streaked down her legs and onto the floor...she just p*ssed on my kitchen floor...she just had...an accident.

Thats all for now and I think it's a little short so don't kill me if it it. X_X

that as cool (a bit weird) but cool and i really like how you say the persons point of view

Thanks Rasu-kun...but yeah,it was just a lot of fluff in this chapter...^-^ Thanks for commenting.

any day aku any day...

^-^ So yeah...I'm getting writing mojo back so I'll probably have more than five chapters without having a writers block and waiting FOREVER to post a new one that'll suck...lol

oh well good luck and don't give up

Thanks and I'll keep that in mind.^_^

ok ^^

So,whats new in life?

well school starts for me tomorrow

Same here and I almost failed last year so I've gotta try harder...I'm gonna dddddiiiieeeee.....X_X

what grade?

In two classes I got a C or higher,Science and Homeroom...all others I either got a D or lower.T_T

ouch well work hard and studie (also make notes)

I do that all of it but...the problem is...I bomb all of my important tests and on projects I forget something thats usually important...but yeah...If I don't take your advice and use it,I'm gonna have to go to...PRIVATE SCHOOL!!! *Dun Dun Dun/Evil Music*