by Well...I was going to write a shippuuden story so I wanted to get some opinions...it's a fanfic...there are some made up characters and made up scenes...I have an account on quizilla.com I'm sesshesfoxbabe818...if you liek this and want the next chapter I'll post it so yeah.^_^
Me and My Rival's Sister!Love?Friends?Or Rivals As Well?
Part 1: Naruto's Wager and The Vanishing Uchiha!
*Naruto's Point Of View*
I walked with the perverted Sannin known as Jiraya,we were walking back to Konohogakure,The Village Hidden In The Leaves...Our Home."So...are you excited to come back home?"the white-haired man asked me,I grinned,nodding."I wonder if anything's changed..."I said half to myself,my mind replayed to my last encounter with Sasuke Uchiha.I clenched my fists in aggrivation then sighed as we came into few of the large entrance gates of Konoha.The Sannin had a slight smile and we walked through the entrance into our home.
*???'s Point Of View*
With a groan I sat up,still hating everything ever since my brother had left,none of the Village except the Godaime(Godaime=5th Hokage) and some of the higher-ups of the village knew I even exsisted. I Looked around and saw that my fox tails were spread about the bed I slept in,I ignored that and stood to my full height."Atsuko-sama,Lady Tsunade has summoned you..."I heard my summoner's assistant's voice chime from the other side of the door."Hai Shizune-san..."I changed my clothes and my appearence to my natural Uchiha outlook...minus the fox tails and wolf ears.I followed the assistant to the Godaime's office.I saw the two others on my Aniki's team(Aniki=Older Brother)Haruno Sakura and Uzumaki Naruto.I looked at the pale blonde and into her mud-brown eyes,"You wanted me Tsunade-sama?"she nodded with a small smile."Yes Atsuko,I need you to assist in the check-up of their training..."I gave a slight nod and stared with my one blue and one green eye over the faces of my new victims.
**Training Ground 3**
*Still Atsuko's Point Of View*
Instead of taking a bell test, the two were ordered to fight either me or Kakashi. Naruto was selected to be my opponent and Sakura was Kakashi's, I stood on the opposite end of the blonde. "BEGIN!"Kakashi called,Naruto started running at me and threw a punch,my eyes were closed and I caught it gripping his hand and throwing him over me in a wide arc.He landed on his feet sliding a little away he swung his leg to kick me but I heard the motion of air around it and caught that too.I smirked and opened my eyes,"Now this is the kid who trained with Jiraya...he's seems a little weak..." I taunted and he growled,throwing a punch which I simply dodged and I threw him yet again,he sailed through the air for a little and connected solidly with a tree.He grunted as he stood up again,he made a clone and focused chakra into his hand forming the technique known as Rasengan.He ran at me again and I dodged a little,the swirling chakra blew a hole in my shoulder instead of squarely into my chest.I gasped and my hand went up,clenching into his forearm with my claws growing out and piercing through the cloth and some of his flesh,the animalistic parts grew out of my body and the demons inside of me were now in control. My eyes became hazel and I snarled,lunging for the boy's neck as if I were a predator going in for the kill of prey.He shouted in pain and my claws ripped into the side of his neck.
*Kakashi's Point Of View*
I heard Naruto's shout of pain and raced over,knocking the demonic female Uchiha out of consiousness,the animal tails and ears remained but I knelt down next to Naruto."You alright??" I asked,looking at him,"What the heck is she?!"he said,trying to keep his voice steady and succeeding barely."She's a holder like you only of two demons and she's an....."I trailed off."She's a what Kakashi-sensei?"he asked,trying to stop the bleeding on his neck.I let out a heavy sigh,"She's an Uchiha Naruto...an Uchiha..."my student's breath hitched and he looked over at the black-haired girl...hatred,pain and sorrow clouding his oceanic blue eyes.
*Naruto's Point Of View*
I felt the pain of losing my friend...so much like a brother...well up,I hated that he'd left for Orochimaru and I felt sorrow towards the girl I was attacked by,Sasuke was part of her clan and left for a cruel snake-like monster."Easy Naruto...now come on...I have to look at your neck and her shoulder,I think you snapped it..."the jounin said,ripping me from my thoughts.I gave a nervous laugh,"I-i didn't mean to do that..."the silver haired wonder chuckled slightly,"Well...move your hand..."he said.I removed my hand from my bleeding neck,I winced as Kakashi touched in lightly,"Thats deep...not very long of wide but it's deep..."he said in a serious yet calm tone.He used a medical scroll and healed the gash leaving no scar.He moved over by Atsuko,he gently turned her onto her back getting a whimper in responce.He looked at her shoulder and I had indeed snapped it,there was a small protrusion from a bone.He sighed and pulled out another medical scroll and pushed the bone back into place, healing it."I think thats it for training today...we'll meet up again tomorrow..."he said,Sakura was walking to leave and Kakashi had left me to carry the female Uchiha to Tsunade's office and explain.
**Walking to the Office**
*Still Naruto's Point Of View*
As I walked,her clawed hands were holding into my clothes,as though she were scared of something in her sleep-like state.I was clueless on my options of what to do,either continue walking,drop her or stop and wake her up and see whats wrong...I had no idea.I decided to stop and see what was wrong,I pried her hands off and set her against a tree and woke her up.Her multi-colored eyes were revealed as she awoke,looking to me with a constant hate apparently she growled quietly."What was your problem??"I asked,she looked away with a disaproving scoff,"It's none of your business..."we glared at one another,making anime lightning."Tell me!!"I growled,she got up in my face,"MAKE ME!"she yelled."Alright!We'll play a game of tag,I'm it...if I can tag you out then you tell me,if I can't then I'll be your assistant for a week!!"I made a wager.She grinned,"Then you'd better go get a maids outfit...you'll never catch me..."with that,she vanished.I thought to myself,'CRAP!!'
Ending Of Part One!
Me and My Rival's Sister!Love?Friends?Or Rivals As Well?
Part 1: Naruto's Wager and The Vanishing Uchiha!
*Naruto's Point Of View*
I walked with the perverted Sannin known as Jiraya,we were walking back to Konohogakure,The Village Hidden In The Leaves...Our Home."So...are you excited to come back home?"the white-haired man asked me,I grinned,nodding."I wonder if anything's changed..."I said half to myself,my mind replayed to my last encounter with Sasuke Uchiha.I clenched my fists in aggrivation then sighed as we came into few of the large entrance gates of Konoha.The Sannin had a slight smile and we walked through the entrance into our home.
*???'s Point Of View*
With a groan I sat up,still hating everything ever since my brother had left,none of the Village except the Godaime(Godaime=5th Hokage) and some of the higher-ups of the village knew I even exsisted. I Looked around and saw that my fox tails were spread about the bed I slept in,I ignored that and stood to my full height."Atsuko-sama,Lady Tsunade has summoned you..."I heard my summoner's assistant's voice chime from the other side of the door."Hai Shizune-san..."I changed my clothes and my appearence to my natural Uchiha outlook...minus the fox tails and wolf ears.I followed the assistant to the Godaime's office.I saw the two others on my Aniki's team(Aniki=Older Brother)Haruno Sakura and Uzumaki Naruto.I looked at the pale blonde and into her mud-brown eyes,"You wanted me Tsunade-sama?"she nodded with a small smile."Yes Atsuko,I need you to assist in the check-up of their training..."I gave a slight nod and stared with my one blue and one green eye over the faces of my new victims.
**Training Ground 3**
*Still Atsuko's Point Of View*
Instead of taking a bell test, the two were ordered to fight either me or Kakashi. Naruto was selected to be my opponent and Sakura was Kakashi's, I stood on the opposite end of the blonde. "BEGIN!"Kakashi called,Naruto started running at me and threw a punch,my eyes were closed and I caught it gripping his hand and throwing him over me in a wide arc.He landed on his feet sliding a little away he swung his leg to kick me but I heard the motion of air around it and caught that too.I smirked and opened my eyes,"Now this is the kid who trained with Jiraya...he's seems a little weak..." I taunted and he growled,throwing a punch which I simply dodged and I threw him yet again,he sailed through the air for a little and connected solidly with a tree.He grunted as he stood up again,he made a clone and focused chakra into his hand forming the technique known as Rasengan.He ran at me again and I dodged a little,the swirling chakra blew a hole in my shoulder instead of squarely into my chest.I gasped and my hand went up,clenching into his forearm with my claws growing out and piercing through the cloth and some of his flesh,the animalistic parts grew out of my body and the demons inside of me were now in control. My eyes became hazel and I snarled,lunging for the boy's neck as if I were a predator going in for the kill of prey.He shouted in pain and my claws ripped into the side of his neck.
*Kakashi's Point Of View*
I heard Naruto's shout of pain and raced over,knocking the demonic female Uchiha out of consiousness,the animal tails and ears remained but I knelt down next to Naruto."You alright??" I asked,looking at him,"What the heck is she?!"he said,trying to keep his voice steady and succeeding barely."She's a holder like you only of two demons and she's an....."I trailed off."She's a what Kakashi-sensei?"he asked,trying to stop the bleeding on his neck.I let out a heavy sigh,"She's an Uchiha Naruto...an Uchiha..."my student's breath hitched and he looked over at the black-haired girl...hatred,pain and sorrow clouding his oceanic blue eyes.
*Naruto's Point Of View*
I felt the pain of losing my friend...so much like a brother...well up,I hated that he'd left for Orochimaru and I felt sorrow towards the girl I was attacked by,Sasuke was part of her clan and left for a cruel snake-like monster."Easy Naruto...now come on...I have to look at your neck and her shoulder,I think you snapped it..."the jounin said,ripping me from my thoughts.I gave a nervous laugh,"I-i didn't mean to do that..."the silver haired wonder chuckled slightly,"Well...move your hand..."he said.I removed my hand from my bleeding neck,I winced as Kakashi touched in lightly,"Thats deep...not very long of wide but it's deep..."he said in a serious yet calm tone.He used a medical scroll and healed the gash leaving no scar.He moved over by Atsuko,he gently turned her onto her back getting a whimper in responce.He looked at her shoulder and I had indeed snapped it,there was a small protrusion from a bone.He sighed and pulled out another medical scroll and pushed the bone back into place, healing it."I think thats it for training today...we'll meet up again tomorrow..."he said,Sakura was walking to leave and Kakashi had left me to carry the female Uchiha to Tsunade's office and explain.
**Walking to the Office**
*Still Naruto's Point Of View*
As I walked,her clawed hands were holding into my clothes,as though she were scared of something in her sleep-like state.I was clueless on my options of what to do,either continue walking,drop her or stop and wake her up and see whats wrong...I had no idea.I decided to stop and see what was wrong,I pried her hands off and set her against a tree and woke her up.Her multi-colored eyes were revealed as she awoke,looking to me with a constant hate apparently she growled quietly."What was your problem??"I asked,she looked away with a disaproving scoff,"It's none of your business..."we glared at one another,making anime lightning."Tell me!!"I growled,she got up in my face,"MAKE ME!"she yelled."Alright!We'll play a game of tag,I'm it...if I can tag you out then you tell me,if I can't then I'll be your assistant for a week!!"I made a wager.She grinned,"Then you'd better go get a maids outfit...you'll never catch me..."with that,she vanished.I thought to myself,'CRAP!!'
Ending Of Part One!
