by | Tears Looking upon the ocean as my turn of fate staring desolately into my full mind of state drifting away like the sands of a lost beach I turn to you lost like that of flickering light You forgive for the things that have been unleashed awrath upon you I feel as though theres no escape from this villain of regret your haunting the deep compartments underseeking in my heart i want to tear you from my soul and forget your existence's start but "regret"..you burrow your way taking me down like the thrashing waves Tears stain deep in my skin like a deep sin that has marked me of myself Its hard to forgive...feeling the lust pain of those horrible filled moments but its painful like the dead memories of your past to forget.. Seeking enclosure looking for a guardian to call protection I search only to see that you are that reflection... |
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Crispin's 11th short poem
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the poem may be short but ive written shorter
your still one of the best poets cris
your still one of the best poets cris
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thank you
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just statin the facts
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awesome cris! =D
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thanks nbf
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that was awesome!!!
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thank you choushi!!!
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i liked it. your one of the best poets out there. Your poems ROCK.
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thank you tsuki^^
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really good. seriously, one of the best
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thank you saba
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Oh gosh, it's so pretty.
Nice Again :D
Nice Again :D
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thanks keya^^
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OH SHIT! This is thes BEST one!!!! Its AMAZING Onee-chan O_o
I love this one most!
I love this one most!
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one of the best cris 
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thanks kitaro
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sooo sad i love it
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thank you judai
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your welcome cris
