"I decided to write again! (poetry...)"

"So I noticed Cri had been writing poems recently (Which are pretty freckin' awesome) and realized it had been a couple months since I had written anything. So I decided it was time to write again. This is to the guy who keeps saying he'll show up though he never comes and dosen't cancel. Enjoy!"



Waiting



Well I was hoping we could talk about our future

But it seems that you didn’t remember to come

So do I forgive you again?

It seems that’s all I tend to do recently

And what do I get in return?

I wish I knew that too

So why do I bother waiting here if I know you won’t come?

I guess I’m still holding on to some form of hope…

But what do you care right? Right!

You left me standing in the rain while you took the umbrella

You let my whole world crash right below my feet

Or is that my fault?

For letting my life revolve round you for a while

You said you wanted to try us out

Well maybe you can’t take me out for a test run

I’ve decided that I can’t wait for you to make a decision

It’s now or never

And if you can’t choose now I’ll choose never

So I decide to move on

Leaving you and your troubles behind me

I know I won’t regret this choice

You may call me the next day

But I promise not to answer

You may try to sweep me away

But I will stay firm on the ground

I stop revolving around you now and float off

I decide not to be held down by the pathetic bonds you tie to me

I can walk on water without your extra baggage

I get up and walk outside again

“No more waiting” I say

And walk into the sunlight

Maybe I can find someone else…

it would b better if you posted this in the ff corner...it'll bring people back to that place instead of staying in the ramen shop always...or the atami bar n inn

http://wayoftheninja.org/jiraiya-s-fanfic-corner-f38/makai-t3006.htm

okay

awesome I rly like it akia^_^ very nice.^^

everyone likes poetry...

for some reason girls are good at poetry

http://wayoftheninja.org/jiraiya-s-fanfic-corner-f38/makai-t3006.htm

"Thankyou very much Cri!"

Choushi wrote:for some reason girls are good at poetry

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"Well I'm a guy..."

oh..cool..mybad..but still for some reason girls are good at poetry..

some girls aren't good at poetry.

"Is there anyone else who thought I was a girl?"

idk...but im just really sorry dude...

"It's okay, I just died a little inside..."

haha.....oh.... really??

"Yeah, theres not much of me left though... Don't worry, people have done worse..."

ehh..sry..>_< i also thought u were a girl...
stupid me.....

"It's okay, my avi is a girl, my gender isn't up and the poem is about a guy, I can see where anyone would get confused..."

srry...we are brothers..(same village)..but i just assumed that u was a gurl...cuz da avi...and i didnt want to ask u cuz if i got it wrong it would b awkward...and this is awkward too...ironic huh?

Choushi wrote:srry...we are brothers..(same village)..but i just assumed that u was a gurl...cuz da avi...and i didnt want to ask u cuz if i got it wrong it would b awkward...and this is awkward too...ironic huh?

"It's okay, seriously. I can see where you would get the impression, definately since my gender isn't up and I said the poem is about a guy..."

awesome poem,, good job.

i knew akia was a guy, because of muku-nii.



btw awesome poem.

I knew he was a guy also :P

Your poem is very cute Akia ^_^