Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

ppft, everyone's doing poetry.
and so i shall show you guys how i can totally mess up poetry admirers.
i hope your eyes burn.

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Perceive

If you can see what I can see,
maybe you'll see happiness.
If you can see what I can see,
maybe you'd be breathless.

But if you can see what I can see,
can you live with this lifelong burden?
If you can see what I can see,
can you handle the truth forbidden?

Please try to see what I can see,
even if it may make you leave.
Another day is drawing near,
just try, try and perceive.
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Bah, you need more confiednce!

It's a really good poem X3

Wow death and poetry never seen that coming!! ^_^

bah.

i had to write that for that stupid pocket poem crap.

that was really good! i thought it was a lot better than all of those mushy love poems everywhere.

Envy My Pain


Hate me, break me,
try to take me down.
Rumors, categorizations, bullying-
go ahead, I won't make a sound.

Call me a masochist?
I'll just laugh in your face.
Kick me down all you want,
you're the one that's the disgrace.

Sure, sometimes I break and ask why-
why it has to be me, why these scars remain.
But in the end, I'll realize,
that you, you envy my pain.

well i love poetry:love:

I don't envy pain.

Mih...Poetry...

For the world my eyes did catch fire.

death-chan wrote:Envy My Pain


Hate me, break me,
try to take me down.
Rumors, categorizations, bullying-
go ahead, I won't make a sound.

Call me a masochist?
I'll just laugh in your face.
Kick me down all you want,
you're the one that's the disgrace.

Sure, sometimes I break and ask why-
why it has to be me, why these scars remain.
But in the end, I'll realize,
that you, you envy my pain.

Nice. I like this one alot.

I like them both!

...

Well, it's just a dream.

Oh crap.

Hmm?

...go write a poem

Really?
You want me too?
I will then!

Cool beans.

Poetry is so easy. But I guess this is good work there Death. Not sure, I am not sure what constitutes a good poem.

Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.

Then you are probably a really good poet. All the best are humble.

quater wrote:For the world my eyes did catch fire.

that's poetry too

death-chan wrote:Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.

Same..I cant write it good at all

Banouin wrote:

death-chan wrote:Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.

Same..I cant write it good at all

You mean well... >.>

And I read your poems. They're good.

death-chan wrote:

Banouin wrote:

death-chan wrote:Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.

Same..I cant write it good at all

You mean well... >.>

And I read your poems. They're good.

haha should have seen that "Well" thing coming, and no Mine all suck

death-chan wrote:

quater wrote:For the world my eyes did catch fire.

that's poetry too

Flame eyes are not poetry

Yeah, okay Bano. I'm going to shove a tomato in your face.

And... Kazekage... you never know ._.

death-chan wrote:Yeah, okay Bano. I'm going to shove a tomato in your face.

And... Kazekage... you never know ._.

Tomato!