sciency poem thing

the feeling of intelligence
being sentient
being intelligent
personality,thought,adaptability,science
so branches life and from that every possibility
everything spoken or given or taken is possible
every person every planet every alien is its own code its own body
whether its mind is sentien,free,controlled,nothing each body takes up life
each thing can and will serve a purpose


time allows movment and passage in a way like a boat on the sea or a car on the road with intelligence comes theory and opinion thus leading eventually to judgment causing tension (bloodshed) and counterthoughts distraction all beings of the mind and body are distracted by thought and judment leading to the final end...death

post any comments whether they are good bad or critical

it was some what confusing in the first part.

well it was kind of just raw unrefined thoughts

I liked the first part. The second was more of a speech not a poem.

so i have mixed opinions coming in

good kitaro good

thx james

yw bro

i like it it is sooo cool^^

thx judai