by YES FOR LONG!!!! 
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Choosing The Right Path
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I wasnt here for like a week!!!
I would've been ahead of you!
I would've been ahead of you!
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Well just write ur story cause I wanna know what happens next!
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*Mutters*
Bossy ass...
*Writes story*
Bossy ass...
*Writes story*
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I sry but the first one was so good I just want to hear the next one!
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Im done anyway, gonna post it now.
Personally, I love your profile
Lol
Personally, I love your profile
Lol
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BEL.the.Ripper.
- Spoiler:
- The first Alice was a courageous red one
With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
She cut down, many things that stood in her way
Making a path that was a trail of blood
The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
A prisoned sinner
There was no way of knowing she was there
Except the red path that followed behind her
The second Alice was a calm, blue one
Singing a song that filled wonderland
The false notes which he sang till the end
Created a crazy world in wonderland
That Alice was born of a Flower
Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die
The third Alice was an innocent green one
A beautiful figure there in wonderland
She had fooled many people to do her bid
A strange country was then created up
The Alice was the queen of the country
Possessed by a dream of distortion
Afraid of losing her life to death
Ruling the country of hers forever
Walking down a red path in the forest
Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
An invitation to them from the castle was
The playing card of hearts
The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
They were curious througout the wonderland
They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
From there wandering that they had just arrived
A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother
They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
The two were to never to wake from their dream
The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!
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Toshiro looked like he was about to protect before Tsundae shot him an annoyed look. Sighing in defeat, Toshiro glared at Maeko lightly, who glared right back.
dont you mean protest?
uh.. sorry, ><;; i do this sometimes..
and uh.. nice, i read #2 before i read this one so i was confuzzled ><;;
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Lmao, Charm-chan made an error
oh wells..I do it alot too -.-
oh wells..I do it alot too -.-
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BEL.the.Ripper.
- Spoiler:
- The first Alice was a courageous red one
With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
She cut down, many things that stood in her way
Making a path that was a trail of blood
The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
A prisoned sinner
There was no way of knowing she was there
Except the red path that followed behind her
The second Alice was a calm, blue one
Singing a song that filled wonderland
The false notes which he sang till the end
Created a crazy world in wonderland
That Alice was born of a Flower
Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die
The third Alice was an innocent green one
A beautiful figure there in wonderland
She had fooled many people to do her bid
A strange country was then created up
The Alice was the queen of the country
Possessed by a dream of distortion
Afraid of losing her life to death
Ruling the country of hers forever
Walking down a red path in the forest
Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
An invitation to them from the castle was
The playing card of hearts
The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
They were curious througout the wonderland
They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
From there wandering that they had just arrived
A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother
They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
The two were to never to wake from their dream
The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!
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we all do... even deathy...
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It was good. The beginning was good, just kind of bland. I'm just saying this because I know you're a great writer, but I just din't really find you're story memorable at the moment. Maybe I have to read another chapter... Did you put up a second chapter? First chapters are usually slow for all writers, novices or experts.
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