by ok. so im working on a book and im looking to publish when completed and id like some feedback i have receieved several opinions from people from all walks of life and if you love to ready fiction i reccomend my book. but it is anime and extremly gory and violent but not too big on swearing a few damn its and the occational f word but it really focuses on fighting
Characters: Kazuya *main male lead*
Ishizu *main female lead*
Sato*father of kazuya*
Ireshima*elder brother of kazuya*
Sariyu*mother of kazuya*
the listed characters are of the race of shinseiaku which translates to divine evil in japanese
after the heavenly war between God and Lucifer, God created the demi-god order. this mixture of angels and demons were in charge of protecting the human world along with regular angels from any super natrual threats while God focused on keeping things together and keeping Lucifer inHell
two demi gods clashed in opinions. Genocide, the demi god ofthe chaotic inferno disagreed with Oblivion, demi god of the voids mad ambition of consuming human souls to gain power. the two clashed and the collision of the inferno with void almost split the barrier betweenearth and hell.
the demi god order fell from grace andGodthen created shinseiaku as their replacments.
shinseiaku arethe offspring of a full blooded angel and a full blooded demon Kazuya and Ireshima are the 2 princes of the kingdom. Kazuya is hated byall except his mother, his maid Ishizu, and the people of his kingdom. his father targets him and his mother on a daily basis and his brother basks in the warm glow of his fathers affection.
the story is similar to dragon ball z in termsfist fights and like yu yu hakusho in terms of spirit energy attacks but the incorperations of their swords and the ability to channle their power thru their sword is what distinguishes it from the rest. Romance is a focus of this story as well as tragedy but it is for people of all kinds and is full of emotion and description
in closing, i would like comments and ideas on the story and ideas for a title as well. i have worked on this story for about 3 years now and still haven't picked a name for it lol. so any help will be much appreiciated
Characters: Kazuya *main male lead*
Ishizu *main female lead*
Sato*father of kazuya*
Ireshima*elder brother of kazuya*
Sariyu*mother of kazuya*
the listed characters are of the race of shinseiaku which translates to divine evil in japanese
after the heavenly war between God and Lucifer, God created the demi-god order. this mixture of angels and demons were in charge of protecting the human world along with regular angels from any super natrual threats while God focused on keeping things together and keeping Lucifer inHell
two demi gods clashed in opinions. Genocide, the demi god ofthe chaotic inferno disagreed with Oblivion, demi god of the voids mad ambition of consuming human souls to gain power. the two clashed and the collision of the inferno with void almost split the barrier betweenearth and hell.
the demi god order fell from grace andGodthen created shinseiaku as their replacments.
shinseiaku arethe offspring of a full blooded angel and a full blooded demon Kazuya and Ireshima are the 2 princes of the kingdom. Kazuya is hated byall except his mother, his maid Ishizu, and the people of his kingdom. his father targets him and his mother on a daily basis and his brother basks in the warm glow of his fathers affection.
the story is similar to dragon ball z in termsfist fights and like yu yu hakusho in terms of spirit energy attacks but the incorperations of their swords and the ability to channle their power thru their sword is what distinguishes it from the rest. Romance is a focus of this story as well as tragedy but it is for people of all kinds and is full of emotion and description
in closing, i would like comments and ideas on the story and ideas for a title as well. i have worked on this story for about 3 years now and still haven't picked a name for it lol. so any help will be much appreiciated
