My Gaara Poem(that's not what its called)Please read!

The Past Is Frightening

I was a little boy
When my uncle tried to kill me
I thought I loved him so
But he was never ment to be

My father killed him
He didn't deserve to live
Or so my father said
And even though I can't sleep
I lay in my bed and cry

I think of the cruel things I've seen
I miss my uncle so
But I can't believe he tried to kill me
Me of all people
Who would've thought?

I was nice and,I guess you could say,caring
I was,but now I am not
I am cold
I let no one in
For my is heart is not solid gold

I am Sabaku No Gaara
And this is my story.

Please promise me you'll keep my secret
And take it to your grave
Or I will hunt you down
And you will not live much longer

Please just remember this:
The past can be very frightening
And keep it a secret

Tell me if you think I should post another one^^

I think you should post another one. It's really cool.

thank you!I'm gonna post it in this one though,so I'll still have it posted,It'll just be in here

I write these,y'know

Wow...........you must really love writing all of these these- they all sound amazing by the way,

Seriously, they do.

*laughs*

Yeah, whatever keeps you busy in your spare time...

not bad!

thanks!I can write like 5 of these in about 3 minutes...I have like 10 more now

awesome peoms

urs and everyone elses poems are really good =]