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    Post by theBOSS. Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:32

    *does a quick happy dance*

    bloodly-chan's coming!!!!!!
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    Post by Blaisism Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:32

    This is in short what has happened so far:
    She killed her lover because he was cheating on her with her other personality, so after that, she attempts suicide by jumping off a building. However, her other personality made her fall in the water and swim toward the surface, surviving. SHe then begins going to a church, trying to recieve religious guidence. Her other personality takes over and she kills the priest as well, and the more timind personality is on the run from the police. Then, weeks later, they've given up and she murders another man after he cannot pay off his gambling debts for her sadistic tendancies and games.
    All in three chapters of poetry.
    Yes, I am insane.
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    Post by theBOSS. Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:34

    that's... deep.
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    Post by Renden2005 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:34

    konbanwa all...
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    Post by BlackAnbuNinja Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:35

    hey renden long time no see
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    Post by theBOSS. Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:35

    hey renden
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    Post by Renden2005 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:36

    indeed Black-chan...

    hi Death-chan...
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    Post by Blaisism Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:38

    death-chan wrote:that's... deep.

    It is psychotic and disturbing.
    The last one I wrote was last year.
    Most people around my age in my area don't even know what sadistic means.
    But these poems are some of my best, so when I make another addition I try to keep a theme going, and try to keep a story developing.
    So far, the theme has been to have another persoanlity appear and another murder.
    Lovely, isn't it?
    I'm having her wage psychological war on herself while murdering those around her.
    Someone my age should not be able to do that.
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    Post by meandkiba4ever Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:39

    hi guys! wassup? *sways a little*
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    Post by theBOSS. Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:39

    Blaisism wrote:
    death-chan wrote:that's... deep.

    It is psychotic and disturbing.
    The last one I wrote was last year.
    Most people around my age in my area don't even know what sadistic means.
    But these poems are some of my best, so when I make another addition I try to keep a theme going, and try to keep a story developing.
    So far, the theme has been to have another persoanlity appear and another murder.
    Lovely, isn't it?
    I'm having her wage psychological war on herself while murdering those around her.
    Someone my age should not be able to do that.

    maybe in the end she doesn't like her dark side and tries to kill herself but someone stops her and she ends up going to rehab?

    i dunno, i've never written those REALLY dark kinda stuff
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    Post by Blaisism Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:39

    Hi person. :3
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    Post by Renden2005 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:40

    not much...
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    Post by Koneko_Bozu8 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:40

    ub bj I have to eat a hotdog ^_^
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    Post by theBOSS. Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:40

    HOTDOGGGGGG
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    Post by Renden2005 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:41

    ??? okay Koneko-chan...
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    Post by Blaisism Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:41

    death-chan wrote:
    Blaisism wrote:
    death-chan wrote:that's... deep.

    It is psychotic and disturbing.
    The last one I wrote was last year.
    Most people around my age in my area don't even know what sadistic means.
    But these poems are some of my best, so when I make another addition I try to keep a theme going, and try to keep a story developing.
    So far, the theme has been to have another persoanlity appear and another murder.
    Lovely, isn't it?
    I'm having her wage psychological war on herself while murdering those around her.
    Someone my age should not be able to do that.

    maybe in the end she doesn't like her dark side and tries to kill herself but someone stops her and she ends up going to rehab?

    i dunno, i've never written those REALLY dark kinda stuff

    I'm thinking of having two more chapters at least.
    One more murder, then a collective suicide most likely.
    ...
    I have problems. ._.
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    Post by theBOSS. Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:41

    lols.

    umm.. question. we ARE allowed to have TEXT siggies, right?
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    Post by BlackAnbuNinja Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:43

    i guess
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    Post by Koneko_Bozu8 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:43

    hai...just not those picture ones...that;s why aniiki and I have links
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    Post by Renden2005 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:45

    yeppers...click them i command you\/
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    Post by theBOSS. Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:46

    NO ONE COMMANDS DEATH
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    Post by Renden2005 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:47

    oh yea...well i did...but i never said you had to...i just commanded you to...
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    Post by Blaisism Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:47

    death-chan wrote:NO ONE COMMANDS DEATH

    Is that so?
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    Post by Koneko_Bozu8 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:47

    calm down death-chan ^_^"
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    Post by Koneko_Bozu8 Sat Sep 22 2007, 21:49

    be quiet for my emu

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