by Aichu Sun Jul 12 2009, 18:28
I like the face. It's not exactly what I'd call realistic, but the style is very nice. It kind of has a bit of an American feel, which I prefer over the Japanese anyhoo. I like the nose an lips especially. The jaw and eyes could be a bit more rounded and the chin is too short.
No idea what's going on with the body though. She seems to have a bit of a hunch back or something. Do some observational drawings of people around you sometime. Just quick sketches to get the proportion right. It helps.
Good luck!