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    My Gratitude...and Blossming

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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Tue Jun 30 2009, 21:25

    This is a thank you poem to everyone who has supported me and meh poems & enjoyed reading them.
    Mostly want to thank the badass Keya for pushing me forward to and gave me confidence to post my poems. GRACIAS~
    6/30/08~~

    The sand trickles down that...seemlessly uncracked hourglass
    my memories...float in each grain of sand
    As i sit there under the tree watching the seemlessly ungrounded clouds
    The wind carries and craves for my spirit...i whisper "thank you"
    As the pages of my poem book turn to my first poem "Separation"
    I bask in the warm arms of the sun...thinking of the future...

    "Where would I be without not sharing and showing my feelngs through this beautiful thing they call poetry"
    Confidence....it came knocking at my door and my heart...through someone very inspiring
    Sharing my vast amounts of feelings..pain & pure emotions through this unique thing called poetry....holding my pencil firmly in my hand..I lay my heart at the tip of this pencil
    I've seen that I'm blossoming from a lonely wallflower to a bright sunflower...what joy and accomplishment i feel i have done
    It looks like i have won...

    My gratitude it shows through my poetry...
    My blossoming shines forever in the night along with stars..
    I've touched certain people where it means the most....thats all that i care as i sit hear along the coast
    Poetry it has thrashed its peaceful hands in the deepest compounds of my heart....its there to stay hitting every beat..but not tearing me apart

    In my mind flourish many ideas like wild sakuras in the field
    The pen in my hand is the key to entering my heart..take a look and never yield...
    The pages are stained with all of my emotions...let them crash into your mind like the neverending tide of an ocean
    You take a part of me as u read through every line
    don't stop looking...as your eyes become intertwined with mine
    Let me show through my eyes and you'll see my imagery

    At last it has been a year...as i set my pen to my blank page
    You are my audience...and there's nothing more to say but "thank you"
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    Post by Temari Tue Jun 30 2009, 22:05

    I like it cris. It quite unique and lovely. I think you should be a poet. ^_^
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    Post by gaara12 Wed Jul 01 2009, 11:17

    im impressed. man, ur good at poetry
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    Post by judai12 Wed Jul 01 2009, 22:34

    I really like this one cris its soo pretty and nice
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    Post by KarateKeyaQ Sun Jul 12 2009, 01:59

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww.! I loved it!
    && Your welcome! I agree with Mari, you should become a poet but I know you've probably already thought about that already.

    It ws so beautiful. When you become real big and famous, make sure I get a free copy of the poem books ^_~ hehe.

    Great job!
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sun Jul 12 2009, 02:12

    thank you soo very much keya, truly. yeah i have thought of it^^ you'll be the 1st keya.
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    Post by King_Of_Blades Fri Jul 17 2009, 16:05

    Thats really good I like the first stanza.
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sun Jul 19 2009, 22:18

    thanks james
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    Post by King_Of_Blades Sun Jul 19 2009, 22:32

    Your welcome.
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    Post by sabaku no ketsueki Sat Aug 01 2009, 18:43

    WHAT IS WITH THESE BLUE POSTS?!

    sorry. Just...really. What the freedom?

    Anyways, that was a cool shout-out to your fans. Nice imagery, too. Pretty good!
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sat Aug 01 2009, 18:46

    lol it turns blue when u click on the Thank you thingy next to qoute.

    thank you saba^^
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    Post by sabaku no ketsueki Sun Aug 02 2009, 21:31

    what the eff? really?

    wow! what a great admin I am! XD
    thanks for teaching me something new :P
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sun Aug 02 2009, 22:15

    hahaha ur welcome saba

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