Curse of Souls [Lyrics]

Rate! I want to know how bad this is :P
I didn't look over the lyrics twice, I just sort of wrote them down..
And it's a bit depressing ^_^;;

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Behind these fake paper blinds,
The pitch black sun slinks through the crying fog.
Plain tan desks and ballpoint pens,
Dust-white chalk screeching lies again.

And though, I...feel the curse of souls, deep inside,
I feel, I...can't hear the demons anymore.

Above, below, side-by-side,
Show the sun, burn down the blinds.
Break the walls, set me free!
Curse of souls, settle over me.

Above these grim stony clouds,
The rain hold back from falling; suicide.
Dead brown grass and wilted leaves,
Flowers hold nothing for lonely bee.

And now, I...hear the fear of souls, deep inside,
I hear, I...hear the screaming of my soul.

In front, behind, and all-around,
Cue the rain, and break the clouds.
Rip down the fog, set me free!
Curse of souls, settle over me.

The paper blinds...
The stony clouds...
Curse of souls...
Scream out loud.
Ballpoint pens...
And wilted leaves...
Just let me be...
Just let me be!

Curse of souls, scream from inside out!
Make me tremble, make me shout!
Break the walls and rip the fog,
Shatter the demons, make peace for all...

Above, below, and side-by-side,
Show the sun and burn the lies.
In front, behind, and all-around,
Cue the rain, and make it loud!
Tear down these walls,
And rip down these blinds,
Shatter the fog,
Clear my sight.
Tear down these walls,
Rip down these blinds,
Shatter the fog,
No more lies!

Curse of souls, scream out loud!
Curse of souls, scream from inside out!
Curse of souls, (curse of souls)
Scream out loud, (scream out loud)
Curse of souls, (curse of souls)
From inside out, (inside out)
Curse of souls, (curse of souls)
Settle...
Settle...
Settle...
Settle over me.

I liked it. But I don't think my votes count.

Do you happen to play the guitar?? I already thought of a good
tune that would go wiith it. Did you have a tune in mind or just
the lyrics??

I would so listen to that if it was a song!!!!

1000000000/1000000000

Q: You count xD

SSS: No, but I'm thinking of taking it up ^_^ And yeah, I had a tune going with the lyrics in my head :3

Charm: Thanks ^____^

Always-Abby wrote:Q: You count xD

SSS: No, but I'm thinking of taking it up ^_^ And yeah, I had a tune going with the lyrics in my head :3

Charm: Thanks ^____^

Fast or slow??

:O I really like this! I mean I really do. . .

SickSelfishSycho wrote:

Always-Abby wrote:Q: You count xD

SSS: No, but I'm thinking of taking it up ^_^ And yeah, I had a tune going with the lyrics in my head :3

Charm: Thanks ^____^

Fast or slow??

Sort of in the middle xD
I guess a bit more on the slow side though :P

Aki: Thanks! :3