Oh, Mother

She seems so distance...and far away..
is she someone who i'll be able to grasp if i see her someday
I clearly resemble her...don't I?
If i could see picture of "you"...my heart itself would fall to the floor..
You there in me residing in appearance and DNA..and ur there and i can't ignore
Questions webbing over my mind...that i seek to break with you
unknowning of family is why i have come to you...

Its painful at times to see others with their mothers as i think of "you"
How are you..? what do you do?..Do you still remember me..as i do you..?
There's so many questions that i have yet to ask
As for you i am still willing to grasp
Always lurking in mind, your someone I want to find
I'd drop to my knees feeling my heart plummet If I could meet you
No one knows the lonliness that resides in me that I feel
Its difficult to talk about "you" and not struggle with the i can muster
Oh, unbelievably there's a cluster of emotions I'm feeling
Do you understand these words i'm concealing...

As the years go by...i long more to search for you
to help cope with these lost feelings that are spilled upon me
I long to understand "you"..those feelings "you" felt when you had to say goodbye to me
It must have been difficult...but I believe it was for the better
I long to look for "you"..brown eyed...brown haired...woman
Could i be that mirrored-reflectionof you
You said "goodbye"...but now i long to say "not a day goes by that I don't wonder of you"
I wish to say "hello.."

Oh, mother...

I like it a lot. It reminds me of my life in the present and past. It reminds me of how my mother is acting now a days and how i miss....I can't say who it is or I'll just cry.

its soo sad:(
but really good poem

thank u tema & judai.

ur welcome^^

Its amazing ^_^ -i just said a sad peom was amazing -

thanks shiro, lol. its the intended mood shiro but thanks.

i know its a sad peom (like makes u sad not a bad peom xD)

but its a good sad peom ^_^

get it?

*nods*i know what you mean, thanks^^

xD it was hard to put the oppisits into a sentance xD
^ spell check

Awwwies, it's so sad!
I couldn't imagine that pain, or feeling feeling of 'if'.
This poem is well put for people to understand it!

But it's an AMAZING poem!

Amazing!

thank u laura & azuzu

really good, cris

thanks saba

s sad and beautiful. great job.

thank u GL

OMG! that is such a good poem! how do u do that?

thank u gaara

I'm not sure if this was the poem you meant for me to read. But I thought this one was pretty solid. Overall, yeah. Liked it, though it was saddish.

thank u Q, this was the poem i wanted ya to read.

Its beautiful...

aw, so cute.

thanks darnas & jan

Nice one Crispy.