A tale of Drowned Memories

Sitting all alone on a swing, her head hanging, tears rolling down her pale face. The boy, smiling, smirking more, sitting next to the girl, nothing but a memory. The happiness in the scene had disaperated. The bright eletric sun, now a dull gray. The freshly dewed green grass, now a wilting brown.The boy had sucked the happiness from the girl and moved it with him, as she heard the deep crack from within her chest. Her depresion dripping like water from an overflowing dam. The tears stopped. The girl,with a face of twisted pain on her face, fell out of the swing and onto her knees, slowly feeling the life being eaten by her misery. Her movments stopped. Her face calm, she fell completly, her stomach making contact with the ground, producing a dull thud. She lie cold and still like porcelin, a result of misery and deepresion drowning memories not enough to prevent killing the girl.

Holy cow.

what?

It was good. Surprisingly dark, but good.
I hadn't had a chance to use the smilie, so I figured I'd throw it in. Ignore it. ^_^

lol

Ish what I do.

hm, i thought what you did was be annoying? jk!

Yes, I have completed my mission here! *wooshes out of thread*

i really liked. ^__^

O.o WOW.
That was AMAZING.
Its was dark, like Yoyo
at stated, but the imagery
and the way the
words captured you.
I love it. ^-^

dark, but really good, i loved it

thanks all ^_^