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its really good cris
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awwwwwww soooooo cute ... I loved that line "He walks upon the path of the swaying trees
gazing at the flowers as they dance in the cool brisk breeze" really beautiful
gazing at the flowers as they dance in the cool brisk breeze" really beautiful
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thank you sayomi^^
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np :D
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Cool ^_^ I like narrative poems. It's always neat to here a story in poetry- they are often very beautiful. Like ama said, the detail and imagery is beautiful.
(psst, it's 'wandering past'!)
(psst, it's 'wandering past'!)
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thank you^^
yea i forgot to fix that part "past".
yea i forgot to fix that part "past".
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serious amazing
job there Cris. ^-^
job there Cris. ^-^
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thanks kia^^
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Who's hinoya?
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