by I wrote this a long time ago and well I duno tell me if its any good...
Encounter Part:
one
An
ominous, chilling silence had fallen over the area and the still
humid sticky air clung to her heavy body. Her breath was faint as she
quietly rested under the giant oak tree.“Hey--
she’s over here,” a young man with glasses spoke as he observed
her with his dark eyes.“So
she sleeps, huh?” a muscular, dark skinned man spoke and carelessly
walked to the motionless woman.“Umm…that…”He
was cut off when a brisk voice snapped, “Shut up! She’s out;
don’t give me crap! You got it, kid.”“Yeah.
Sure,” the boy mumbled and looked over at the third man. He was
pale in complexion, with black hair and burning red eyes. He seemed
to be the leader (or at least the most respected man) of the group.
Whether that was because of his strength or seemingly deadly essence,
one might never know.It
was still midday, but these ninja had grown careless-- so obsessed
with pursuing something they had forgotten that they were unwelcome
guests…not only the Forest of Death, but the Leaf Village as well.
The dark man used his dirty shoe to turn the women over; her face was
that of the dead, a cold white color, and her eyes half open had lost
their youthful glisten. Yet her smoky green eyes followed the man’s
shoe to his face.“We’ve
got you now…I do believe we will be paid well tonight; don’t you
think so, Kabuto?” the man said, and looked over at the
white-haired boy with glasses behind him.She
can’t be taken down so easily-- even if that poison was powerful.
As long as she is breathing, she can still bite, Kabuto thought to
himself and adjusted his glasses.“Raiden…don’t
underestimate her,” Kabuto warned.“Kabuto’s
right. Don’t be so hasty to find your grave.” The pale man looked
cruelly at the women with his blood-stained eyes. Raiden let out an
irritated snarl and pushed his right heel into the woman’s gut. The
woman groaned, rolling her face to the cold ground as she coughed up
a mouthful of blood. Raiden chuckled and removed his foot, an evil
sneer crossing his face.“Don’t
even think about it,” the red eyed man snapped. “She is my wife;
only I will be given the luxury of killing her.”“If
you want it so bad, just go into town…I'm sure you can find--”
Kabuto started.“Enough!”
Hitoshi shouted. “Bring her. We're going.”Raiden
hesitated but bent down to pick the girl up; he knew he was no match
for the medical ninja or Hitoshi, the red eyed man. Suddenly a loud
cry rang overhead along with an obnoxious gagging noise and the
intense cracking of bone. The two men looked back to see their
partner being strangled like a rabbit between a wolf’s teeth. The
women had used her last bit of strength and bit down on the man’s
throat.Kabuto
looked at the scene in complete horror. If she can do this after she
was like that…what the hell is she? and her chakra...Hitoshi
jumped at the sight but quickly calmed himself and began walking
over, when he felt the woman's body heat up with a sudden increment of
chakra, he stopped.“So
the drug is wearing off already?” Hitoshi mumbled, astounded, and
glowered at the woman exuding the over-bearing amount of chakra.“It
looks that way. We know where she is, let’s retreat for now.”
Kabuto ordered. Hitoshi nodded and the two disappeared with a poof of
smoke.The
woman opened her eyes and found that the air around her was going
cold as the sun set. She releases her prey and and stands.“What
happened?” she mumbled as her body began to shake with nervous
jitters. She looked at the corpse sprawled at her feet. The man’s
eyes were still wide open glazed with fear. She let out a loud scream
and ran her hands to her face.“Stop,
calm down,” she murmured to herself. “It’s done, it doesn’t
matter.” She shook her head violently and pulled at her
blood-stained hair, attempting to stop herself from accepting what
she had done. Releasing the splattered locks she let her hands fall
to her sides and took in a deep breath trying to regain her
composure. "One…two…three…four…five…" she
counted, taking comfort in the systematic order, and swiftly walked
away.She
soon came upon a large red building and climbed to the top for a good
look around. The building seemed to be placed in the middle of a vast
dense forest, which suddenly stopped as if fenced off and not allowed
to spread as a natural forest should. This also gave it an equal
distance all the way around. She switched her gaze and watched the
painful lush of the evening sun as it sank over the giant trees. The
woman closed her eyes for a brief second before opening them again.So
I really am here…I hope he's alright. the woman thought and pressed
her fingers to her forehead, slowly massaging as if to rub away a
headache. "Why can’t I remember anything? What did I do to
that man? Why? Why? Why…?" she started with a yell, but
quickly faded into a mumble of distress. With a sigh she laid her
tense body against the tarnished red roof and tried to relax herself
on the sun-heated plates of the rooftop. Her body began to shake
again as the chilling cold air licked at her body. The sun was gone
and darkness quickly consumed her."Looks
like I'm stuck here for now." she spoke to herself. She stood
up, took a last look over the area before disappearing behind a
broken window.
So should I post more???
Encounter Part:
one
An
ominous, chilling silence had fallen over the area and the still
humid sticky air clung to her heavy body. Her breath was faint as she
quietly rested under the giant oak tree.“Hey--
she’s over here,” a young man with glasses spoke as he observed
her with his dark eyes.“So
she sleeps, huh?” a muscular, dark skinned man spoke and carelessly
walked to the motionless woman.“Umm…that…”He
was cut off when a brisk voice snapped, “Shut up! She’s out;
don’t give me crap! You got it, kid.”“Yeah.
Sure,” the boy mumbled and looked over at the third man. He was
pale in complexion, with black hair and burning red eyes. He seemed
to be the leader (or at least the most respected man) of the group.
Whether that was because of his strength or seemingly deadly essence,
one might never know.It
was still midday, but these ninja had grown careless-- so obsessed
with pursuing something they had forgotten that they were unwelcome
guests…not only the Forest of Death, but the Leaf Village as well.
The dark man used his dirty shoe to turn the women over; her face was
that of the dead, a cold white color, and her eyes half open had lost
their youthful glisten. Yet her smoky green eyes followed the man’s
shoe to his face.“We’ve
got you now…I do believe we will be paid well tonight; don’t you
think so, Kabuto?” the man said, and looked over at the
white-haired boy with glasses behind him.She
can’t be taken down so easily-- even if that poison was powerful.
As long as she is breathing, she can still bite, Kabuto thought to
himself and adjusted his glasses.“Raiden…don’t
underestimate her,” Kabuto warned.“Kabuto’s
right. Don’t be so hasty to find your grave.” The pale man looked
cruelly at the women with his blood-stained eyes. Raiden let out an
irritated snarl and pushed his right heel into the woman’s gut. The
woman groaned, rolling her face to the cold ground as she coughed up
a mouthful of blood. Raiden chuckled and removed his foot, an evil
sneer crossing his face.“Don’t
even think about it,” the red eyed man snapped. “She is my wife;
only I will be given the luxury of killing her.”“If
you want it so bad, just go into town…I'm sure you can find--”
Kabuto started.“Enough!”
Hitoshi shouted. “Bring her. We're going.”Raiden
hesitated but bent down to pick the girl up; he knew he was no match
for the medical ninja or Hitoshi, the red eyed man. Suddenly a loud
cry rang overhead along with an obnoxious gagging noise and the
intense cracking of bone. The two men looked back to see their
partner being strangled like a rabbit between a wolf’s teeth. The
women had used her last bit of strength and bit down on the man’s
throat.Kabuto
looked at the scene in complete horror. If she can do this after she
was like that…what the hell is she? and her chakra...Hitoshi
jumped at the sight but quickly calmed himself and began walking
over, when he felt the woman's body heat up with a sudden increment of
chakra, he stopped.“So
the drug is wearing off already?” Hitoshi mumbled, astounded, and
glowered at the woman exuding the over-bearing amount of chakra.“It
looks that way. We know where she is, let’s retreat for now.”
Kabuto ordered. Hitoshi nodded and the two disappeared with a poof of
smoke.The
woman opened her eyes and found that the air around her was going
cold as the sun set. She releases her prey and and stands.“What
happened?” she mumbled as her body began to shake with nervous
jitters. She looked at the corpse sprawled at her feet. The man’s
eyes were still wide open glazed with fear. She let out a loud scream
and ran her hands to her face.“Stop,
calm down,” she murmured to herself. “It’s done, it doesn’t
matter.” She shook her head violently and pulled at her
blood-stained hair, attempting to stop herself from accepting what
she had done. Releasing the splattered locks she let her hands fall
to her sides and took in a deep breath trying to regain her
composure. "One…two…three…four…five…" she
counted, taking comfort in the systematic order, and swiftly walked
away.She
soon came upon a large red building and climbed to the top for a good
look around. The building seemed to be placed in the middle of a vast
dense forest, which suddenly stopped as if fenced off and not allowed
to spread as a natural forest should. This also gave it an equal
distance all the way around. She switched her gaze and watched the
painful lush of the evening sun as it sank over the giant trees. The
woman closed her eyes for a brief second before opening them again.So
I really am here…I hope he's alright. the woman thought and pressed
her fingers to her forehead, slowly massaging as if to rub away a
headache. "Why can’t I remember anything? What did I do to
that man? Why? Why? Why…?" she started with a yell, but
quickly faded into a mumble of distress. With a sigh she laid her
tense body against the tarnished red roof and tried to relax herself
on the sun-heated plates of the rooftop. Her body began to shake
again as the chilling cold air licked at her body. The sun was gone
and darkness quickly consumed her."Looks
like I'm stuck here for now." she spoke to herself. She stood
up, took a last look over the area before disappearing behind a
broken window.
So should I post more???
