Cris's 10th poem

Tie of Compassion

I stand there and here looking upon your face..
you became one of my closes friends...immediately we linked to each other like the ocean touching the morning sand...
this feelings i feel are so strong..it feels unbearing at times
this tie of brotherly and sisterly compassion..wow its beyond the deep confines our hearts
You make me shine in ways that no one has ever entered..or reached with their bear hands

You think of me as perfect..oh how that really blesses down on my soul from the sun...
I see you blossom into such a great guy..this compassionate person inside you..
I thank you..for releasing this special part of you to me
My soul flows like river with a never ending release of calmness
I hold those special moments..strapping and tying them into my mind..like trying to capture the light...
I only get it in parts..like a puzzle of life

You make my heart smile in this tie of compassion
my soul welcomes you..a drifting spirit lost but full of love instead of ration
Brother...you extract the good things of me...with so much care to even spare
All i can do is stare with a look of ease
You see me and say please
Our blood runs thicker than any vein in our body can possibly hold..
you say i make you smile is what I was told

Wow, this describes the brother/Sister relationship perfectly.

Wow. Amazing Poem. Awesome, Crispin!

i love it ^_^

i love it too

OMG CRIS.i love it it is soooooo good^^

nice

no its better then nice.its coool

Great poem Cris. So sweet ^_^

thank you all^__^

It's great! I have no inspiration for anything, I think I smoked it all out O__O Jk, no I don't smoke. As far as I know...

wow, this poem is so Compassionate and loving, it's like, warming to read ^_^
I love the Simarlies used, like 'like the ocean touching the morning sand' that's my favorite line!

Great Work, amazing Poem, Poet :P

thanks laura^^*nods*

cris it one of your best poems.i could never be as good as writer as u

sure you can judai, i'm not the greatest poet out there. i'm amateur but enjoy writing the poems a lot no matter what. i can express myself so much through them.

but u r the best.^^

I LOVE IT

Aw, Cris... It's great! I love it! How do you come up with such brilliant topics? I love all yer poems! :D

thanks kat^^ inspirations just comes to me so i start writing

ive had it once but thats it

thanks kitaro

your right cris

i'm right about what?

i forgot sorry

ok??

love the poem^^