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    Life By a Rose

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    Post by Temari Wed Jul 30 2008, 11:40

    Life By A Rose

    The rose in her hand slowly falls apart
    The first petal contains her happiness
    The second contains love
    The third contains caring
    The fourth conatins her hope
    The fifith contains her memories
    And last but not least the sixth petal the one she wants to hold on forever,
    And that is her dreams.

    The first petal falls carrying her happiness with it
    The second falls taking all the lies she was told about how he loved her
    The third falls taking away all her care about others
    The fourth falls,
    It was what she believed in, But now that its gone she couldnt help but to shed a tear of sadness
    The fifth one falls carrying her happy moments in time that she enjoyed the most
    The sixth one falls carrying her dreams with it.
    Those dreams of hers will never come true, they arre all just a thought now.

    All the petals have fallen,
    The girl's life is shattered.
    She cries tears of sadness and happiness at the same time.
    Looking out that window she sees the glowing light of the stars outside.
    She wanted to wish upon a star but her hope was crushed and left on the floor
    Her face stained with tears
    And her eyes looked like dark holes filled with sadness and pain
    Her heart sank into her sadness and felt torn into pieces.

    She found her happy pills and a glass of water
    One by one she swallowed the pills,
    Each one better than the last.
    Slowly each one makes her drowzy and weak,
    She drops the bottle of happy pills,
    Her grip on the glass loosens until she falls asleep.
    The last thing she could do was smile.


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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Wed Jul 30 2008, 13:17

    OMG that was such a great poem tem

    it was sad..and happy in a way. she wanted to escape so much frm the pain, but she was still happy
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    Post by Temari Wed Jul 30 2008, 13:18

    thank u cris.
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    Post by King_Of_Blades Wed Jul 30 2008, 13:18

    great poem tem
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    Post by Temari Wed Jul 30 2008, 13:20

    thank u J.
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    Post by King_Of_Blades Wed Jul 30 2008, 13:20

    yw tem
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    Post by judai12 Wed Jul 30 2008, 17:30

    that is the poem u showed me. its sooo good
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    Post by Temari Wed Jul 30 2008, 17:45

    judai12 wrote:that is the poem u showed me. its sooo good
    lies!! all lies!!!
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    Post by judai12 Wed Jul 30 2008, 18:02

    whatever
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    Post by KarateKeyaQ Wed Jul 30 2008, 21:03

    Surprisingly, it didn't give off a sad vibe to meh.

    Cute.
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    Post by Temari Wed Jul 30 2008, 21:13

    thanks NF.
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    Post by Temari Thu Jul 31 2008, 15:03

    judai12 wrote:whatever
    thank u.
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    Post by [- N y o k o -] ;-LH-; Thu Jul 31 2008, 15:58

    Lol. this is the one thats on Kugu's pro that I was talking about. the one I said kinda describes me in a way, now that you know the story, lol.
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    Post by Temari Thu Jul 31 2008, 16:07

    lol. ^^
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    Post by Temari Sat Aug 02 2008, 11:05

    temi isnt good at writing poems.
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sat Aug 02 2008, 13:55

    yeah u are tema.
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    Post by Temari Sat Aug 02 2008, 17:45

    no. my poems suck. they arent as popular as urs.
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sat Aug 02 2008, 18:15

    i just tell a lot of ppl to check out my new poems, so i can see their comments on them and how i did.^^
    it don't mean they're more popular than yours, your great poet too tem, believe in that, plus u've been doing it longer than i have.
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    Post by amaterasu Mon Aug 04 2008, 13:16

    man that is so sad

    temari!!


    someone tell her that someone cares so much that's he'd bring back those pedals and make them never fall off again
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    Post by Temari Mon Aug 04 2008, 13:19

    its just a poem ama. ^^
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Mon Aug 04 2008, 13:21

    see, tema u write amazing poems too. ur poem just rly got to ama.

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