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Venomu wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Venomu wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:This was the other one, like...*Thinks* a few days after we broke up:

Never say I love you, if it really isn't there.
Never talk about feelings, if you really don't care.
Never hold my hand, if your gonna break my heart.
Never say your gonna, if you don't plan to start.
Never look into my eyes, when your going to lie.
Never say hello, if you really mean goodbye.
If you really mean forever, than please say you'll try.
Never say forever...because forever makes me cry.

..Damn...

*Laughs* Is that a good damn?

You know i never use cuss words but, wow, that took my breath away, it is so real. How you know the love isn't really love, nothing inside the shell you call your love, scandoulous emotion, deceiving ideals, opposite reactions, false hope, and a crushing and burdening blow at the end. Wow..

Banouin wrote:But Charm! You must do more ok! I want to see what you can come up with

knssquad wrote:g2g peeps!

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Venomu wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Venomu wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:This was the other one, like...*Thinks* a few days after we broke up:

Never say I love you, if it really isn't there.
Never talk about feelings, if you really don't care.
Never hold my hand, if your gonna break my heart.
Never say your gonna, if you don't plan to start.
Never look into my eyes, when your going to lie.
Never say hello, if you really mean goodbye.
If you really mean forever, than please say you'll try.
Never say forever...because forever makes me cry.

..Damn...

*Laughs* Is that a good damn?

You know i never use cuss words but, wow, that took my breath away, it is so real. How you know the love isn't really love, nothing inside the shell you call your love, scandoulous emotion, deceiving ideals, opposite reactions, false hope, and a crushing and burdening blow at the end. Wow..

I guess because of what he did...it just seem to come to me. This was all the stuff he did...he would talk about feelings, and love, and look at me...but I knew it wasnt me he was seeing...than he used to say how we would be together forever...all through school and such..but..*Sighs* neh, things change, ya know? ^_^

knssquad wrote:g2g peeps!

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Venomu wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Venomu wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:This was the other one, like...*Thinks* a few days after we broke up:

Never say I love you, if it really isn't there.
Never talk about feelings, if you really don't care.
Never hold my hand, if your gonna break my heart.
Never say your gonna, if you don't plan to start.
Never look into my eyes, when your going to lie.
Never say hello, if you really mean goodbye.
If you really mean forever, than please say you'll try.
Never say forever...because forever makes me cry.

..Damn...

*Laughs* Is that a good damn?

You know i never use cuss words but, wow, that took my breath away, it is so real. How you know the love isn't really love, nothing inside the shell you call your love, scandoulous emotion, deceiving ideals, opposite reactions, false hope, and a crushing and burdening blow at the end. Wow..

I guess because of what he did...it just seem to come to me. This was all the stuff he did...he would talk about feelings, and love, and look at me...but I knew it wasnt me he was seeing...than he used to say how we would be together forever...all through school and such..but..*Sighs* neh, things change, ya know? ^_^

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:But Charm! You must do more ok! I want to see what you can come up with

I guess I will...My teachers said that it wasn't good though...they turned me down for the poem competition.

Banouin wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:But Charm! You must do more ok! I want to see what you can come up with

I guess I will...My teachers said that it wasn't good though...they turned me down for the poem competition.

I dont see why they did, I think its good and i tihnk it would have won!

Angelic Harmony wrote:We once talked about, how we would always be together.
What ever happened to those times,
of when you told me how much you will always love me?
Do you remember?

There was also the time,
when you have told me you would protect me from everyone.
When you were thinking this,
were you referring to yourself as well?

Because, it seems that you protected me from everyone.
But that is not who I needed protecting from,
really, it was you, right?
You were the one that had broken my heart.

The one that had said bye without a care.
The one that just turned his back on me.
The one that had promised,
he would do everything in this power to give me the world.

But what you really gave me was pain.
Pain that never seemed to heal.
And because of this agonizing pain,
I will never have someone like you, to promise me that again...

This one...hmm..I was just thinking of something..I dont reember what. I need more work on it..

Angelic Harmony wrote:We once talked about, how we would always be together.
What ever happened to those times,
of when you told me how much you will always love me?
Do you remember?

There was also the time,
when you have told me you would protect me from everyone.
When you were thinking this,
were you referring to yourself as well?

Because, it seems that you protected me from everyone.
But that is not who I needed protecting from,
really, it was you, right?
You were the one that had broken my heart.

The one that had said bye without a care.
The one that just turned his back on me.
The one that had promised,
he would do everything in this power to give me the world.

But what you really gave me was pain.
Pain that never seemed to heal.
And because of this agonizing pain,
I will never have someone like you, to promise me that again...

This one...hmm..I was just thinking of something..I dont reember what. I need more work on it..

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:But Charm! You must do more ok! I want to see what you can come up with

I guess I will...My teachers said that it wasn't good though...they turned me down for the poem competition.

I dont see why they did, I think its good and i tihnk it would have won!

*Shrugs*
They said it was a 'love' poem.
and they didnt want love poems.

Venomu wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:We once talked about, how we would always be together.
What ever happened to those times,
of when you told me how much you will always love me?
Do you remember?

There was also the time,
when you have told me you would protect me from everyone.
When you were thinking this,
were you referring to yourself as well?

Because, it seems that you protected me from everyone.
But that is not who I needed protecting from,
really, it was you, right?
You were the one that had broken my heart.

The one that had said bye without a care.
The one that just turned his back on me.
The one that had promised,
he would do everything in this power to give me the world.

But what you really gave me was pain.
Pain that never seemed to heal.
And because of this agonizing pain,
I will never have someone like you, to promise me that again...

This one...hmm..I was just thinking of something..I dont reember what. I need more work on it..

maybe a little less of compositon on the second verse, seems like a reffered sentance to me.

Banouin wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:But Charm! You must do more ok! I want to see what you can come up with

I guess I will...My teachers said that it wasn't good though...they turned me down for the poem competition.

I dont see why they did, I think its good and i tihnk it would have won!

*Shrugs*
They said it was a 'love' poem.
and they didnt want love poems.

Pfft, you dont need them then!

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:

Angelic Harmony wrote:

Banouin wrote:But Charm! You must do more ok! I want to see what you can come up with

I guess I will...My teachers said that it wasn't good though...they turned me down for the poem competition.

I dont see why they did, I think its good and i tihnk it would have won!

*Shrugs*
They said it was a 'love' poem.
and they didnt want love poems.

Pfft, you dont need them then!

Lol, I guess, I dont know. I have a low self esteem. so, I listen to what people say.

Angelic Harmony wrote:Lol, I should be getting to sleep also. I have a chorus competition later this afternoon >.>
*Sighs*

Venomu wrote:Well, i'm off to bed too. It was good mixing and matching with you two.