by Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:No one likes the one i put up?
WHAT!?!?!?
I love your too!!!
You and Veno-kun's seem to catch my attention with ya poems so much!
What about the new one i just put up? ^_^
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What about the new one i just put up? ^_^
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Great minds think alike, as i've said a few times before. Good writing.Banouin wrote:Venomu wrote:Banouin wrote:Venomu wrote:Yes he is.Banouin wrote:Ven still here?...I have another one i want him to see....I come to him to much..
Cool...tell me what you think....
"What lies behind those hazel eyes?
Captivated; they draw me in.
May I see; my love?
Or is my heart to dark with hate?
My eyes to blind to see?
My mind to black to grasp your light?
Tell me, my love; What lies behind your hazel eyes?"
Visionary, seeing through eyes, it's a gate.
I see that someones being drawn into the captivating eyes of a loved one.
But they are unsure if they are good enough to hold on to that love, wondering if theres too much harshness to grasp it. The mind as in the polar opposite gate opening for the other. SOmeone desperately searches for a way inside the gate, so they can grab hold of the love they've been searching for.
It's very nice.
Thats why i like coming to you Ven..You get my work. ^_^
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Venomu wrote:Great minds think alike, as i've said a few times before. Good writing.Banouin wrote:Venomu wrote:Banouin wrote:Venomu wrote:Yes he is.Banouin wrote:Ven still here?...I have another one i want him to see....I come to him to much..
Cool...tell me what you think....
"What lies behind those hazel eyes?
Captivated; they draw me in.
May I see; my love?
Or is my heart to dark with hate?
My eyes to blind to see?
My mind to black to grasp your light?
Tell me, my love; What lies behind your hazel eyes?"
Visionary, seeing through eyes, it's a gate.
I see that someones being drawn into the captivating eyes of a loved one.
But they are unsure if they are good enough to hold on to that love, wondering if theres too much harshness to grasp it. The mind as in the polar opposite gate opening for the other. SOmeone desperately searches for a way inside the gate, so they can grab hold of the love they've been searching for.
It's very nice.
Thats why i like coming to you Ven..You get my work. ^_^
yup
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My knees being to shake whenever your in sight.
My mind filled with wonder, my heart filled with fright.
Why did this happen?
When did this start?
How do I listen to my mind, without breaking my heart?
I'm confused, don't know what to do.
I can't think of anything except you.
Should I just get over it or should I give it time?
I dont know what to do, because my heart controls my mind.
My mind filled with wonder, my heart filled with fright.
Why did this happen?
When did this start?
How do I listen to my mind, without breaking my heart?
I'm confused, don't know what to do.
I can't think of anything except you.
Should I just get over it or should I give it time?
I dont know what to do, because my heart controls my mind.
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Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:No one likes the one i put up?
WHAT!?!?!?
I love your too!!!
You and Veno-kun's seem to catch my attention with ya poems so much!
What about the new one i just put up? ^_^
I loved it!!
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I dont think i got to see that one Charm *Hugs*
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Banouin wrote:I dont think i got to see that one Charm *Hugs*
*Hugs back*
Really? Hmm *Thinks*
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Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:No one likes the one i put up?
WHAT!?!?!?
I love your too!!!
You and Veno-kun's seem to catch my attention with ya poems so much!
What about the new one i just put up? ^_^
I loved it!!
^__^ then i will keep up the good work
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Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:No one likes the one i put up?
WHAT!?!?!?
I love your too!!!
You and Veno-kun's seem to catch my attention with ya poems so much!
What about the new one i just put up? ^_^
I loved it!!
^__^ then i will keep up the good work
YEASH!!!
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Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:I dont think i got to see that one Charm *Hugs*
*Hugs back*
Really? Hmm *Thinks*
Ya! I liked it!
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great one charm
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Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:I dont think i got to see that one Charm *Hugs*
*Hugs back*
Really? Hmm *Thinks*
Ya! I liked it!
^_^
Thanks Bano-kun!
*Glomps*
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Very nice, i see something about a crush? someones crush on another, but it goes deeper. Deeper into a fixation in the mind but the heart can't take it. So it's confuzing as the two push against each other, making it hurt more. I like this one alot.
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Thanks Danny-chan ^_^
It used to represent my ex >.>
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Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:I dont think i got to see that one Charm *Hugs*
*Hugs back*
Really? Hmm *Thinks*
Ya! I liked it!
^_^
Thanks Bano-kun!
*Glomps*
You should think more of your work..You could be good Charm ^_^
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Venomu wrote:Very nice, i see something about a crush? someones crush on another, but it goes deeper. Deeper into a fixation in the mind but the heart can't take it. So it's confuzing as the two push against each other, making it hurt more. I like this one alot.
*Smiles*
Yea...it was for my ex...He inspired most of my poems. But yea...
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Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Banouin wrote:I dont think i got to see that one Charm *Hugs*
*Hugs back*
Really? Hmm *Thinks*
Ya! I liked it!
^_^
Thanks Bano-kun!
*Glomps*
You should think more of your work..You could be good Charm ^_^
Appreciated!
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Angelic Harmony wrote:Venomu wrote:Very nice, i see something about a crush? someones crush on another, but it goes deeper. Deeper into a fixation in the mind but the heart can't take it. So it's confuzing as the two push against each other, making it hurt more. I like this one alot.
*Smiles*
Yea...it was for my ex...He inspired most of my poems. But yea...
Well it has to come from somwhere...You cant just pull good work out of the air ^_^
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Angelic Harmony wrote:knssquad wrote:
Thanks Danny-chan ^_^
It used to represent my ex >.>
I iz surrounded by poets, I'm just a weirdo ^-^-^
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Banouin wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:Venomu wrote:Very nice, i see something about a crush? someones crush on another, but it goes deeper. Deeper into a fixation in the mind but the heart can't take it. So it's confuzing as the two push against each other, making it hurt more. I like this one alot.
*Smiles*
Yea...it was for my ex...He inspired most of my poems. But yea...
Well it has to come from somwhere...You cant just pull good work out of the air ^_^
The hate ones I had to burn...I found them too depressing.
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Well it's quite good. Inspiration is a key in most poems and art. Even thoughit's a past love, it doesn't melt away form the deep trance they can provide.Angelic Harmony wrote:Venomu wrote:Very nice, i see something about a crush? someones crush on another, but it goes deeper. Deeper into a fixation in the mind but the heart can't take it. So it's confuzing as the two push against each other, making it hurt more. I like this one alot.
*Smiles*
Yea...it was for my ex...He inspired most of my poems. But yea...
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knssquad wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:knssquad wrote:
Thanks Danny-chan ^_^
It used to represent my ex >.>
I iz surrounded by poets, I'm just a weirdo ^-^-^
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Banouin wrote:knssquad wrote:Angelic Harmony wrote:knssquad wrote:
Thanks Danny-chan ^_^
It used to represent my ex >.>
I iz surrounded by poets, I'm just a weirdo ^-^-^
gesundheit
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In fact..The one i just put up...Was about a past love that i lost..It is sad..But i like it
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