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by **Banouin** Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:30

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Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

Post by Banouin Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:30

Dont make fun of the Bano, Here i am going to put up some of my work as in Poems/sayings i come up with. Plz tell me what you think..I will try to keep adding more to this Like one time a week or so, I hope you like it.

here are a few...Some of you have seen them but oh well

"I breathe another sigh; if only to myself
Say your name; if only in a whisper
See you there; if only in a dream
Give an embrace; if only to the open air
I don’t miss you; If only a lie"

"I had a dream last night

In this dream; we kissed

And for once I was happy

Then; I woke

And to my despair; it was only a dream

You were the sweetest dream within all my nightmares"

"I have seen worlds not fit for the normal eyes, Worlds that differ from the ones seat before your waking eyes. Your ignorance blinds you, Binds you to see nothing more then what you are told to see. Take my hand I’ll be your eyes, Will show you that we are worlds apart"

Like i said..I will add more...

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by **Kazekage*Gaara** Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:32

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Post by Kazekage*Gaara Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:32

That's really good!

by **jake989** Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:33

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Post by jake989 Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:33

Nice stuff!

by **Banouin** Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:34

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Post by Banouin Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:34

Wow..That was fast...^__^

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Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:38

awesome poetry.

by **Angelic Harmony** Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:40

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Post by Angelic Harmony Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:40

I love the last one so much o.O
Your GREAT Bano-kun!

by **Banouin** Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:41

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Post by Banouin Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:41

Thinking about it now...This may have gone better in the art one.....I may see if Q or Pf or someone can move it...Idk

by **Banouin** Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:42

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Post by Banouin Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:42

Angelic Harmony wrote:I love the last one so much o.O
Your GREAT Bano-kun!

I liked it alot too ^__^

by **Titaniumxvx** Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:47

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Post by Titaniumxvx Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:47

The first one is depressingly amazing, you should subnit it to a poetry website.

Seriously, awesome work, Bano.

by **Banouin** Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:50

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Post by Banouin Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:50

Titaniumxvx wrote:The first one is depressingly amazing, you should subnit it to a poetry website.

Seriously, awesome work, Bano.

^_^ ty titan

by **Titaniumxvx** Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:55

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Post by Titaniumxvx Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:55

Np.

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Post by Naruto-Eats-Ramen Sat Jan 26 2008, 03:16

...good stuff... the first one seems sympathetic...

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Post by theBOSS. Sat Jan 26 2008, 11:25

Damn, sonn o_O

Crazy.

by **Banouin** Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:13

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Post by Banouin Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:13

death-chan wrote:Damn, sonn o_O

Crazy.

...>.> ...Is that a good damn....Or a bad one Hehehe...

by **Claud-kun** Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:45

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Post by Claud-kun Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:45

I think is a good one Bano ^_^
Nice! I was expecting this.
Keep up the good work dude!

by **Banouin** Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:52

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Post by Banouin Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:52

Ok well Guys, like I said I would add more...I did not know if i should just edit it into my 1st post...But eh...Anyway..i got 2 more for you guys. As always...tell me what you think ^_^

What lies behind those hazel eyes?

Captivated; they draw me in.

May I see; my love?

Or is my heart to dark with hate?

My eyes to blind to see?

My mind to black to grasp your light?

Tell me, my love; what lies behind your hazel eyes?

Torn; divided I stand

Unable, unwilling to find my ground

Why am I forced to choose?

I embrace one; I deny the other

I stand in the center; unwilling and unable to find my ground

Ya...so tell me what you think..

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Post by theBOSS. Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:55

Make a book.

And dedicate it to us ^_^

by **Angelic Harmony** Sat Jan 26 2008, 23:20

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Post by Angelic Harmony Sat Jan 26 2008, 23:20

Banouin wrote:Ok well Guys, like I said I would add more...I did not know if i should just edit it into my 1st post...But eh...Anyway..i got 2 more for you guys. As always...tell me what you think ^_^

What lies behind those hazel eyes?

Captivated; they draw me in.

May I see; my love?

Or is my heart to dark with hate?

My eyes to blind to see?

My mind to black to grasp your light?

Tell me, my love; what lies behind your hazel eyes?

Torn; divided I stand

Unable, unwilling to find my ground

Why am I forced to choose?

I embrace one; I deny the other

I stand in the center; unwilling and unable to find my ground

Ya...so tell me what you think..

Torn; divided I stand

Unable, unwilling to find my ground

Why am I forced to choose?

I embrace one; I deny the other

I stand in the center; unwilling and unable to find my ground

I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!

by **Venomu Veis** Sat Jan 26 2008, 23:57

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Post by Venomu Veis Sat Jan 26 2008, 23:57

Creative.

by **Banouin** Sun Jan 27 2008, 04:18

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Post by Banouin Sun Jan 27 2008, 04:18

..Well...This may be a lil soon..But I have been working my but off with my work and have one more for you guys, I dont think its as good as my others..But...i will see what you guts think..

Blood fills the eyes

Regret grasps the mind

What’s next; nothing?

Fight for breath

And say your goodbyes

The foot prints set in the snow

I see your path before me; why do I hesitate?

I take a step; that I know was yours

Why then do I take two steps back?

You told me not to stray

Why then do I feel I must?

I take a step forward and to my disbelief

Its not the path you took.

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by **Titaniumxvx** Mon Jan 28 2008, 20:51

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Post by Titaniumxvx Mon Jan 28 2008, 20:51

What lies behind those hazel eyes?

Captivated; they draw me in.

May I see; my love?

Or is my heart to dark with hate?

My eyes to blind to see?

My mind to black to grasp your light?

Tell me, my love; what lies behind your hazel eyes?

--------------------------------------------

That's my absolute fav. one.
Amazing. Haha, I imagine your girlfreind having hazel eyes and you trying to figure her out. Awesome.

And Venomu, how'd you change your username to Venomu Veis?

by **Meika-Chan** Mon Jan 28 2008, 21:50

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Post by Meika-Chan Mon Jan 28 2008, 21:50

Titaniumxvx-san, you wrote that? O__O

And Nomu asked me about what to change it to! *ish happy*

And he said that he's not going to spend too much time on wotn anymore.... T_T

by **Titaniumxvx** Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:04

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Post by Titaniumxvx Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:04

No, it was Bano

And you...you can change your username?? How?

by **Meika-Chan** Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:11

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Post by Meika-Chan Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:11

Oh...

And you have to ask a kage.

by **Banouin** Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:36

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Post by Banouin Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:36

2bloodly2love wrote:Oh...

And you have to ask a kage.

I like how its good when you think titan did it but only "Oh" when its me

Pity

...well Anyway

I give a hand; to the one that needed it most

I pulled them up; gave them a shoulder to lean on

I wiped away there tears; even if more replace them

I became there shield; tacking the hit

I was there; within there darkest hour

I was there when I walked with them; into the light.

A tangled dream; a nightmare woven so tight

In the coroner of the darkened room; I see the eyes upon me

I feel the breath; it cools my bones

I feel your grasp; it holds me still

I hear your voice; it tells me things so sweat

I fall; Into your hold; Forevermore.

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