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Dark Waters
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alrighty,get to it young missy!
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Dark Waters
Chapter one
Crying. That was what our favorite blue skined mist nin heard when walking home in the streets of Kirigakure. Curious, he looked for the source of the crying, only to find a little girl around the age of 4, crying behind a dumpster. He kneelt down beside her, and asked her why she was crying. The girl looked up, only to freeze in fright at the sight of the blue man. Imedietly when out of shock, she fell on her bum, and crawled away, only to have her back hit the nearby wall. Our blue friend got up, walked towards the little girl, kneelt down once more, and put his hand out to help her up, while saying, "Its ok, I'm a friend, I won't hurt you, by the way, my name is Kisame Hoshigaki." The girl was still frighted, but saw a little boy, around the age of eight, behind Kisame. The little boy said, "Don't worry, he won't hurt you, oh, and I'm Same." Same smiled, then disappered. The little girl also smiled, before accepting the helping hand. "My name is Meimu Kujo Kanashimi, its nice to meet you Kisa-san," Meimu said when she was on her feet. "Come on, Meimu, I'll take you to my house, and get you some food," Kisame said, walking out from behind the dumpster, fallowed by Meimu, and to said location. After a few minutes of walking, Meimu pulled on Kisame's shirt sleeve. Kisame looked down to find a very tired looking Meimu. He picked her up, and carried her the rest of the way back to his house.
So how is it so far, I've typed more then I've written on paper, plus this is different, and better, then what I wrote, hehe, hope you liked.
Next TimeChapter one
Crying. That was what our favorite blue skined mist nin heard when walking home in the streets of Kirigakure. Curious, he looked for the source of the crying, only to find a little girl around the age of 4, crying behind a dumpster. He kneelt down beside her, and asked her why she was crying. The girl looked up, only to freeze in fright at the sight of the blue man. Imedietly when out of shock, she fell on her bum, and crawled away, only to have her back hit the nearby wall. Our blue friend got up, walked towards the little girl, kneelt down once more, and put his hand out to help her up, while saying, "Its ok, I'm a friend, I won't hurt you, by the way, my name is Kisame Hoshigaki." The girl was still frighted, but saw a little boy, around the age of eight, behind Kisame. The little boy said, "Don't worry, he won't hurt you, oh, and I'm Same." Same smiled, then disappered. The little girl also smiled, before accepting the helping hand. "My name is Meimu Kujo Kanashimi, its nice to meet you Kisa-san," Meimu said when she was on her feet. "Come on, Meimu, I'll take you to my house, and get you some food," Kisame said, walking out from behind the dumpster, fallowed by Meimu, and to said location. After a few minutes of walking, Meimu pulled on Kisame's shirt sleeve. Kisame looked down to find a very tired looking Meimu. He picked her up, and carried her the rest of the way back to his house.
So how is it so far, I've typed more then I've written on paper, plus this is different, and better, then what I wrote, hehe, hope you liked.
- Whatin' Naruto Shippuden
- Waking up in an unfamiliar bed in an unfamilier place
- Popcorn shrimp tastes good with chiken flavored noodles
Hehe, It'll be up soon!
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very good
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arashi ryu wrote:very good
Arigato, Sensei!
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Tis pretty good so far!
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mrssabakunogaara wrote:Tis pretty good so far!
YAY!!
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its very good yuki-san!!
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ninjakid23 wrote:its very good yuki-san!!
Thanks!
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your welcome.
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Interesting............
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