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by **CrispinFreemanWatcher16** Sun Nov 08 2009, 18:40

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Exile

Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sun Nov 08 2009, 18:40

Destiny pulls its awful wrenching weight across my mind
Pulling and dragging me into darkness where no man wants to be left behind...
I walk this land in wonder for I can never slumber...
thinking of home and all I remember, heartfelt memories of last December

Pushed and cast away fighting against this deathly wind
my face scorn with the tattered hatred of the world
Never more to be returned I feel my heart drop...
Drop down into the depths of this wasteland of exile
Striving forward with nothing, but my spirit...
Carrying the despair, loneliness and cautiously not fearing it

The wrath of exile its trying to tear me apart
Ripped and shattered you can't tear at my heart
Sinking it claws in the depths in my mind
intertwining its ghastly hate in lost divinde
Try as you must "exile" you can't bring me down
I'll shine through your evil deeds until the end of time
Living for myself I'll rise from your lurking shadows
Forever free but always thinking of where I came from
"Exile" you can't touch the strength I carry with all that your made of

by **quater** Sun Nov 08 2009, 18:55

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Re: Exile

Post by quater Sun Nov 08 2009, 18:55

You haven't done a poem in a while!

by **Toshii** Sun Nov 08 2009, 20:35

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Re: Exile

Post by Toshii Sun Nov 08 2009, 20:35

that was beautiful crissy-chan! this is the first time i've seen one of your poems!

by **CrispinFreemanWatcher16** Sun Nov 08 2009, 20:39

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Re: Exile

Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sun Nov 08 2009, 20:39

thanks toshii^^

by **Toshii** Tue Nov 17 2009, 20:40

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Re: Exile

Post by Toshii Tue Nov 17 2009, 20:40

CrispinFreemanWatcher16 wrote:thanks toshii^^

by **sabaku no ketsueki** Thu Nov 19 2009, 22:04

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Re: Exile

Post by sabaku no ketsueki Thu Nov 19 2009, 22:04

You don't think this one is good?

I think it's one of your better ones. Nice imagery!

by **Azarni_Rin** Fri Nov 20 2009, 19:06

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Re: Exile

Post by Azarni_Rin Fri Nov 20 2009, 19:06

love it ^.^ its so wonderful ^.^

by **Little_Shiro** Sat Nov 28 2009, 04:00

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Re: Exile

Post by Little_Shiro Sat Nov 28 2009, 04:00

great word choice Cris!

by **CrispinFreemanWatcher16** Sat Nov 28 2009, 04:02

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Re: Exile

Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sat Nov 28 2009, 04:02

thanks shiro, saba & rin

by **Toshii** Sun Nov 29 2009, 18:07

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Re: Exile

Post by Toshii Sun Nov 29 2009, 18:07

are you going to make another?

by **CrispinFreemanWatcher16** Sun Dec 06 2009, 13:17

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Re: Exile

Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 Sun Dec 06 2009, 13:17

yeah i'm going to make more

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