R.I.P.ped

So dispacbly displaced that she's unreckonizable to my eyes
To have the one person you fucking love...thrashed from the very bearings of your memory
Cast aside those long deep feelings of remorse..for u don't want to have them pass you by
Rattling your mind around this venomous snake they call death...
you just can't seem to track that in your path
Crying in the pain for your lost loved one...your heart bleeds achingly
Spilling into deep pools on your bedroom floor seemlessy

Numb in the heart...as the ice in your freezer
A chunk of your heart falls to the pits of darkness...of the unknown
Never to be returned feeling like a dead weight to the world alone
Praying and praying with your entire soul...when all you want is to replace that demonic filled day...
Throw back the hands of time but all u end up doing is asking why
Fighting against that bastard of a wind...
all you want to do is fend the cold hearted truth inside
Why did they have to take her/him?
why not take me...let me be the withering flower
you venomous demon just take me and my power

Everyone dressed in the resenting mournful color...
you look to your mother...saying why did they have to take her.."my lover"
Looking up at the gloomed filled skies..standing there wanting to cry
Flower and candles...dressed around the casket
She's so peaceful there...resting but the aches tamper my chest
I won't forget you ever...you changed everything for me..there's no contest
"I'd die for you.."whispering thru the deslolate atmosphere..
A mournful heart weeps...for you knowing your resting peaceful out there
Your my guardian angel now...

Holding my candle up in respect...never forgotten i tell u that

wow. thats a good poem. its awesome, so to speak. this one is also one of ur best

It's a wonderful poem Cris.
I like it but it makes me depressed reminding me of my grandfathers who passed away.

It was great. Made me think back to all the good memories me and my dad and mom had before they passed away.

Awwwwww!
It was sad but only because you were talking about someone passing, of course. I liked the last line. It was very powerful.
I think everyone could relate to someone close to them passing on. That's why it got us sad, haha.
I liked this one a lot. Good job Cris ^_^

Wow, good job! owo
I agree with Gaara, this is one of your bests ^_^

it's amazing. even i felt ya know, sad.

Absolutely love it Cris.
This might just be my favorite.
But I think it's great that you can make such a beautiful poem even when you're half-asleep. ^_^

thanks for your comments everyone^^

awesome done crisp ^^ this was really good!

no...blue..posts..
no blue posts!

anyways. Depressing. Then again, most poems are. Moving imagery, though. Another good one.