My Friend's Poem

I'm falling.

The ground seems to be flying up to meet me,

At least someone wants to great me.

I'm sinking.

The water is so cold,

Waves over head have rolled.

They pass me by as others passed.

The memories croud in my mind they have massed.

They say your life flashes before you're eyes when you die.

My life is so pathetic, i don't think i'll even cry.

The sand of the floor is so soft,

The water is so cold,

I think i'll take a breath,

And give death on me a hold.


That, my friends, is made of awesome!

ooh i luv the rhymin rly awesome

Yay I'll let her know ^.^

yeah its a good poem congrats to your friend

dude that was so awesome. i liked how it ryhmed.

Yay she'll be so happy people like it ^.^