Cris's 7th poem

CrispinFreemanWatcher16 wrote:Pain

This pain it comes in many forms to attack the heart and mind of humans
It pulsates with a deep throbbing, like a needle from a shot and all you want is to resist the fumes...Why does "pain" seek to mess with the lives of people?

Can't "pain" just disappear and disinegrate away...
Like acid...why do you keep haunting my torchered soul...can't you tell...that I've had enough of you!..All you do "pain" is stain me...having me feel regret because of you, causing my heart to feel the brunt force of it all....

As I go through this thing called "pain"...I begin to grow stronger...and gradually my heart begins to toughen and become stronger in each step...but at the same time "pain"...you are wreckless and try to break my spirit...

Somtimes dealing with "pain"...you are not easy...its not hard to forgive...but hard to forget...one thing I do learn from "pain" is you can grow stronger...and it can also teach you lessons...but in the hardest of ways..

"Pain" you have walked through my path of life and you will continue to linger around me...
But i will become a better person all because.... of you "pain" you teach me my mistakes...and give me a chance for me to not do that again...without "pain" in life...
How do you hope be a stronger person?

Sado wrote:

CrispinFreemanWatcher16 wrote:Pain

This pain it comes in many forms to attack the heart and mind of humans
It pulsates with a deep throbbing, like a needle from a shot and all you want is to resist the fumes...Why does "pain" seek to mess with the lives of people?

Can't "pain" just disappear and disinegrate away...
Like acid...why do you keep haunting my torchered soul...can't you tell...that I've had enough of you!..All you do "pain" is stain me...having me feel regret because of you, causing my heart to feel the brunt force of it all....

As I go through this thing called "pain"...I begin to grow stronger...and gradually my heart begins to toughen and become stronger in each step...but at the same time "pain"...you are wreckless and try to break my spirit...

Somtimes dealing with "pain"...you are not easy...its not hard to forgive...but hard to forget...one thing I do learn from "pain" is you can grow stronger...and it can also teach you lessons...but in the hardest of ways..

"Pain" you have walked through my path of life and you will continue to linger around me...
But i will become a better person all because.... of you "pain" you teach me my mistakes...and give me a chance for me to not do that again...without "pain" in life...
How do you hope be a stronger person?

Psst, it's tortured not torchered.
Also wouldn't it be a shot from a needle not a needle from a shot...and why are there fumes...is this needle on fire or is it injecting a gas of some kind?