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Fanfic Contest
Please say if you are going to try a fanfic here and Post it up in honor of Sand week. Good luck with your submissions.
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here's mine...enterant number 1...
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- Prologue:
"The first thing I want to tell you is that if you are looking to be told a story of either a factual or fictional nature, then I apologize. I'm apologizing because you will find neither of them here for i can't tell stories well. But I guess I can't leave you empty handed so..." *the man places his hands on your head* "...I guess I'll have to show you...you will now see everything that I've seen and heard to an extent..." *a light flashes around both of you and our vision begins*
Chapter One) The Remembrance:
You open your eyes and you can't see. You are in a dark room...or so it seems. A little bit of light appears as if you had given a mental command, and you see a man standing next to you. "So..." the man said, "...shall I begin this mental storyboard?" Upon closer inspection you see it is the man who you were talking to not five minutes ago, and that he's blind, but he still seems to be looking, almost through you into your mind.
There is another flash of light and you see yourself standing alone on a roof in Konohagakure, The Village Hidden in the Leaves, overlooking over a fight scene. You see three Jounin and two...Akatsuki??? "But the Akatsuki was demolished twelve years ago." you try to explain to yourself, "Its sad how nobody talks about the battle anymore...its an important part of our history...there are now only four Hidden Villages, one for each one of them that fought."
Now paying attention to the fight to see if you can tell what fight this is. Right away you can tell by the shock of gray hair that one of the Jounin is the leader of the Hidden Fang Village, the "Copy Ninja" Hatake Kakashi. The others are all unfamiliar to you. You see Kakashi fall at one of the Akatsuki guy's feet as a guy with a bowl cut comes in and kicks an Akatsuki guy yelling, "Dynamic Entry".
You appear in the dark room again suddenly. You see the blind man off by himself as if thinking about something. "Where are we?What are you doing?" you yell to him getting no reply. "Hel-" you get cut off by him saying "We're inside your mind...this is a genjutsu...and I am thinking about what to show you next...this should be good."
You try to ask him more but are plunged into a different room where you see the leaders of the Hidden Fan and Whirlpool Villages, Uchiha Sasuke and Uzumaki Naruto. You see the same Akatsuki guys and now you can see that one of them is the blind guy. Sasuke yells "I've survived!" and charges the blind man with his and Kakashi's legendary Chidori, and to your amazement, the blind man knocks it off coarse and into a wall. Naruto just stood back, dazed. When the blind man looks up you see that his eyes are red.
Everything goes black a you appear inside the room that was described as your mind. You see the man who once had red eyes and he asks, "Does anything make sense yet?" to which you reply that you are even more confused than when you started. He looks in your general direction, closes his now pale eyes, and everything goes black and changes.
You open your eyes you see the blind man now confronting Uzumaki Naruto, Hatake Kakashi, and the pink haired leader of the Village Hidden in the Cherry Blossoms, Haruno Sakura. You try to ask him what is going on but before you can he turns to you and looks at you and you know that he knows that you are there whereas the rest don't. The ninja all start to move, save for Naruto. You can only assume that he's in a Genjutsu. This is proven when he starts to choke himself. He suddenly stops as Sakura and some old woman put their hands on his shoulders.
You appear back in the room of your mind. You look around and find the blind man. He asks you, "Are you are ready to see what isn't written down in history?" and everything goes dark.
Chapter Two) The Beginning:
You appear in the sudden damnable abyss of darkness. This time it seemed to take longer to reach your destination, as though the black mass that your body is engulfed in wouldn't leave. The black slowly faded to a dark shade of steel grey after about ten minutes that seemed to pass in hours. Soon you see that you are standing in the middle of a room.
You see the man who was debatably the greatest shinobi in the history of the Ninja World, the Yondaime Hokage, sitting at a desk writing something. He looks up and looks at a sword sitting about ten feet from him. He sands up, walks over to it, and draws this blade that looks oddly familiar to you. While he swings it around you read what he was writing.
Last Will and Testiment
I am leaving everything i have to my wife.
I have already instructed Jiraya-sensei to give
my soon to be born son, Uzumaki Naruto,
the Hyoujin when he is ready for it. On a final
note, I have put a lot of thought into who is going
to be the Godaime Hokage, and this person will be
That was where he left off when he stood up. You think 'The legendary Sannin Jiraiya???' Suddenly a woman, that you can only guess is his wife barges in. She says to him, "Honey, my water broke. Call Rin.", and the scene changes.
As you look on, you see three people; the Yondaime Hokage again, a woman with lightish brown hair in a standard Chuunin outfit, and the Hokage's wife, who was laying down on a bed/table thing in labor. You turn away in disgust and you hear a scream, a babie's cry, and another scream. The second scream was one of terror and sorrow as the once pregnant woman now laid there dead with the man of legend on his knees next to her with tears running down his cheeks.
The scene changes again and you see yourself standing behind the Yondaime who was holding his son and is facing the fearsome Kyuubi No Yoko. He uses his legendary jutsu(the Hiraishin) and equally legendary blade to attack the demon. He soon weakened it to the point of it lying on the groung in pain as he uses the Shinigami No Jutsu to kill himself and trap the beast inside of his newborn son.
You then turn around to see the blind man again and he says, "You know of a small part of the beginning..." You start to speak but are cut off by his saying, "...now to see the rest." You are plunged into the abyss yet again and are sent to a training ground in Konoha.
You see a second Sannin by the name of Tsunade Training Sakura. after blocking a punch and the ground underneath her collapsing a bit Tsunade tells her to stop. "I want to give ou something." She leads her into the buinding they were behind and you follow. she opens a chest of drawers and pulls out a sword. "I want you to have this Sakura." she says as she holds out the Eisei Blade.
"What is it?" Sakura asked. "This is a blade of legend" Tsunade says, "It is asaid to beable to stop death by plunging the blade into said dying person's chest." "Wow" both you and Sakura said shocked at this. "For example." Tsunade says calmly as she hits Sakura in the face full force. Sakura lays there on the floor writhing in pain as Tsunade walks up to her and explains that Sakura would die soon.
Tears roll down Sakura's face as she thinks about how she couldn't help bring Sasuke back after all. She then shows an expression of pain as Tsunade pierses her chest with the Eisei. Her face in a slow, but seemingly painful progress heals itself. After a few minutes she opens her eyes and sits up really fast. You are pulled away from the scene and back into nothingness.
You appear in a dark room lit slightly by a few candles. You see Sasuke standing in front of Orochimaru's dead body. "I guess this makes me the owner of the Kusanagi, huh Orochimaru?" Sasuke says as he walks away and looks at Kabuto. Kabuto collapses as you see that Sasuke has his Sharingan activated. he walks out and takes the real Kusanagi. "This fake has been good enough until now." Sasuke claims as he swings the Kusanagi creating a tornado that he jumps on and fly's off on.
You return to the place you started and you look at the blnd man in front of you and you start to ask him what happened but he cuts you off again. "I must rest. Come here tomorrow if you wish to hear more."
Chapter Three) Intermission 1:
You get home and think over all that you had heard that day. "It felt like it took a few days, but it was just a few seconds. I'm exhausted." you say to no one in paticular. You walk into your room where you see your dog lying on your bed waiting for you to come home. He jumps up and tackles you, licking your face as you get to your bed.
You finally get into bed and fall asleep within a few minutes. You dream of being in the illusion and seeing the Akatsuki symbol, a single red cloud. As four swords tips come together touching in the middle of the symbol. The red cloud fades away as the four blades begin to glow brightly.
Awakening at 3:00 am you sit up and rub your eyes. "I need to get this out of my head somehow." you say to yourself as you getting up for the third time tonight. Not believeing what you are saying "I wonder if that old guy is sleeping well..." your steely gray/black eyes shine a bit as you drift back to sleep.
Again you dream of the same thing only its more indepth. You see the Akatsuki symbol and see the Katana blade of the Hyoujin, the Sakabatou(reversed edge) blade of the Eisei, the double edged blade of the Kusanagi and the glowing white Chakra Blade, all come together at the tips as the Akatsuki symbol disperses. You open your eyes and they flash red.
The blind man walks into a seemingly empty room. "Hello Kisame. Its been a while." "Yes it has Itachi." Kisame responds. Itachi moves the hood he was wearing off of his head. "I found you." Itachi mutters to himself.
"Kisame..." Itachi says, "i just have a few days left to live...and i found..." Kisame interjects "the last Uchiha!!?!"
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Re: Fanfic Contest
quater wrote:Please say if you are going to try a fanfic here and Post it up in honor of Sand week. Good luck with your submissions.
If you feel uncomfortable posting it here, then send it to me and I will pass it to the judges, but the winning Fanfic will get 20 stats, and I will PM it to everyone in Sand.
I get to be a judge, right!
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Banouin wrote:quater wrote:Please say if you are going to try a fanfic here and Post it up in honor of Sand week. Good luck with your submissions.
If you feel uncomfortable posting it here, then send it to me and I will pass it to the judges, but the winning Fanfic will get 20 stats, and I will PM it to everyone in Sand.
I get to be a judge, right!
Sho do.
Go post in the Super Sand topic to make it look more popular ^_^
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Neh, I can put mine here?
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quater wrote:Banouin wrote:quater wrote:Please say if you are going to try a fanfic here and Post it up in honor of Sand week. Good luck with your submissions.
If you feel uncomfortable posting it here, then send it to me and I will pass it to the judges, but the winning Fanfic will get 20 stats, and I will PM it to everyone in Sand.
I get to be a judge, right!
Sho do.
Go post in the Super Sand topic to make it look more popular ^_^
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Hmmm, I may try to put in...its not a fanfic..but it is a story.... >.>
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Cooles!
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Angelic Harmony wrote:Cooles!
You know what, NVM!
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-__________________-
YOU SUCKS!
YOU SUCKS!
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Not like its any good -.-
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it might be!!
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Angelic Harmony wrote:it might be!!
Well I was going to let sas see it...But she never wants to see anything i do
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-______________- I see how u r.
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Angelic Harmony wrote:-______________- I see how u r.
...do you want to see it? >.>
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Yes..*Sniffs*
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....Ok...let me go look it over then....
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YAY!!!!!!
*Huggles sempai*
((that one is free))
*Huggles sempai*
((that one is free))
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umm...no comment on mine???oh well...what's it about Bano???
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Angelic Harmony wrote:YAY!!!!!!
*Huggles sempai*
((that one is free))
ok, ^_^ Brb
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Didnt I been comment on your ren-kun -__________-
Want me to worship it?
Want me to worship it?
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i mean Bano has yet to read mine i think...so i asked about it...
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Meh, than my comment is null and void.
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Renden2005 wrote:umm...no comment on mine???oh well...what's it about Bano???
You have one ren! How come you never told me
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roflmao!!
Its bee in the FF section for months!
Its bee in the FF section for months!
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