Rank B: Fanfiction

Yep! ^^ Its so awesome ^^

I know,I made a friend on here...kinda...his name on here is amaterasu and he's pretty cool.We were at the training grounds and I was gonna invite you but I got confused.^_^

hello you two....welcome to the world of naruto.(on the web)

Thank you for the welcome!!

yeah it can be really hectic here sometimes

Yeah welcome guys and all that jazz.

Thanks a lot ^^

Where do I post my Fanfiction??I have the first Part posted so I have no idea @_@

no u have to pm it to the kages

Oh...well,it's just out there for grabs for anybody so yeah...I just want to get two parts out before I send them to a Kage...

So...how're you??

i'm cool hbu

I'm good,thanks.^_^

the deadline has been extended to wednesday the 5th

o.O

Mine's more than 3 pages on word...

..uhh...send it in a PM

death-chan wrote:o.O

Mine's more than 3 pages on word...

wow 3 chapters?

umm well for some reason i couldn't pm this so here PF



part: IV the original traitor of the leaf



*kibou's dad suprized*

Uchiha????

*second*

yes...

*kibou's dad*

w-w-well i know i'm not a uchiha...and kibou's mom said she was
from...*a shocked look comes upon kibou's dad face* th-the
u-u-uch-uchiha clan!!

*second*

oooh no this is not good

*kibou's dad*

i know its a shock but whats wrong with my son being an uchiha?

*second*

nothing is wrong with most uchiha's...they are the oldest and most favored clan in the village...but...you must not know, huh?

*kibou's dad*

obviously not

*second*

legend has it that my older brother and the first uchiha...madara
uchiha founded this village together (i was too young at the
time)...and they did what they had to do to clear the land of fire of
ALL VILLAGES!!!

*kibou's dad cuts in*

i know this legend i told it to kibou when he was young as a bedtime story.

*second*

well...*flashback*



*a village is in the background consumed by flames*

*screams from the village are heard while madara and the first are in the foreground facing the burning village*

my brother told me that he would always try to be diplomatic with the
villages and try to get them to help the cause...but if they refused my
brother would leave while when the night falls madara himself burned
the village to the ground...

madara was ruthless...*frame of madara cutting off a mans head* he
raveged villages upon villages *frame of madara doing the fireball
jutsu to a hut while the tennants watch hoplessley*...he was pure
evil...and when my brother and madara established the village...madara
challenged him to his hokage spot...my brother knowing this day would
come sometime...accepted...he told madara that he had changed scince
the time when they were genin of the old hurricane village...the battle
went on for four days because they knew eachothers jutsu perfectly
finally ending in the death of the both of the. scince the village was
just starting and i was the strongest at the time i became
hokage...even though madara's bloodline had gotten weaker it was said
that every 5 years a random relative of his will posses his
power.*frame of the first and madara dying.*



*back to real time*

*kibou's dad*

wow...so are you saying that my son has...

*second*

yes, he can and possibly will inherit the eyes of madara uchiha...the...sharingan...



end

not a great chapter

Hello,Im new.. :D!

I couldn't PM you for some reasons(dumb comp). Soo....HEre it goes.

Sakura's faith

And there she was.Staring into the emotionless eyes of Orochimaru.Staring into the eyes of death.Sakura has been training for this moment.This moment to avenge what she lost.She moves into fighting stance.
"Ke tou da!"She bellowed,with fear gripping her heart.
"Koi,"Orochimaru said,with a permanent smerk.
"BAGERU!!!"Sakura charged into battle,avoided the kunais thrown at her and managed to land a punch on Oroshimaru's face.He collapsed.Sakura screamed bloody murder in enjoyment.
But,she knew something was wrong.She turned back to look at his corpse.It was gone.The rubied hair girl was too shocked to move.Orochimaru appeared beside her."Do you know what death tastes like?"Asked Orochimaru,slyly.
Sakura tried to turn her head.She still could not.
Soon,she realised.She was caught in oroshimaru's trap!
The girl started to panic more!Sweat ran down her neck and dissapeared into the fabrics of her vest.
Oroshimaru played with her hair.
"Genjutsu is my specialty,"He boasted.
"Kicking your butt is mine,"Sakura retorted.
"Kinky,eh?"Orochimaru asked.
"PEDO!!!"Sakura screamed her top off.
"Look,we both know what the outcome of this battle is.Might as well give up little doll,"He stated.
"I'M ONLY 15 DAMMIT!"She argued.
"OMG! THEN SASUKE'S ONLY...OMG NUUUU!"Orochimaru screamed.He started to collapse on the floor.Soon,he was so shocked,he passed out.
"Phew.Good thing i'm free now,"Sakura stated,proudly.
"THIS WILL TEACH YOU TO MESS WITH SASUKE-KUN!"
Sakura took out a marker from her bag.
Her look was so sly,she overruled Orochimaru from the scheming list.
She scribbled on Orochimaru's face.She coloured his nose.She drew big,fat lucious lip-outlines around ororchimaru's lips.She added different swirls for fun.
NYEHAHAHAHAHHAHA!*Insert inner Sakura pic here*.

The next day,Orochimaru woke up.He went to the nearest pub,unaware of what Sakura did.Everyone started smirking at him.His face was so puzzled,it must have had 1000 pieces.He met his boyfriend.
"Watcha doin tonight??"Orochimaru asked in a sweet voice.So sweet,you could pour it over pancakes.
"Uhmm.Apparently getting away from you,freak!If you want to get tattoos,GET A BETTER TATTOOIST!"Orochimaru's boyfriend screamed at him.
Orochimaru ran back to his hideout,shedding tears.Orochimaru jumped off a biiiiiig oak tree in the end.Even when he arrived in hell,his face was still the same.Each tainted soul laughed histerically at him.
"I wish i didn't sleep with Sasuke.He's just too hot!"

That's how Sakura's faith wins.

LOLX.

My story isn't PMing either, so should I just follow the crowd and post it on here?

well, the forum is having some problems, and im trying to fix them, so just hold onto your fanfic for now, and ill work on it some more

Uhmm...I have a fanfiction,which Kage do I send it to???

all of them

Oh,okay.Thank you.^_^

im pretty sure the PMs are fixed now, so try sending my your fictions