by Here is an example of our dearest Kazekage having a hell of a time pissing of a couple of mods with his logic we\'ve all come to know and love and his respect for the Village Hidden in Erasers, Hobo Nins, And the Jazz Village. His username here is \"TheRandomJohnny\". This is his \"Create a Ninja\" submittion.
Todo Forashi
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 2:56 am
Name: Todo Forashi
Age:51
Gender:male
Village:Hidden Village in the Erasers
Clan: The Bilims (One of the most powerful before the Eraser village was destroyed)
Elements: Lighting/Earth
Rank: academy student (Hobo Nins quite a bit, bit of a wanderer)
Style: Taijutsu with a touch of personal Ninjutsu
Looks:
Personality:Very Friendly But he has a temper. He is wise and sagely, but despite his age he has a youthful vigor in him. And he has a very epicurean taste which leads to him getting in fights at Ramen Shops and Bad Music stores.
Jutsus:» Bako Ding jin no jutsu
Description:The User is able to summon an army of scythes or reapers that will be head every snake in a million mile radius (Warning may miss 98% of snakes and hit civilians if not performed by an expert)
» Umbrella jump Whip
Description: Turns his Destructive umbrella into a an exploding whip using his mechanical energy (It\'s actually part jutsu part physics problem and is also his main means of transportation)
Jango Demon Jutsu
Description: Used to swarm an army of pencil sharpeners that can instantly grind an army\'s weapons away in the twinkle of an eye rendering them weaponless
Background/History: Born in the village hidden in the erasers as the Chief\'s son, he looked destined to become the Next Chief. But on that dreadful day, snakes burst up from the ground and the underground caverns. Not just any snake. Crystallized Cavern snakes. These snakes were nearly indestructible and destroyed the entire village in a venomous attack. Todo barely got out alive, but he did get alive.
He then wandered most of the Ninja nations for a long time, eventually he went to the Sand village, where he became a scary warlord over the nations and slept underneath palm trees. But eventually he became a laughing stock, so to end his horrid reputation, he destroyed both the Snake Village and the Lightyear village. But this ended in his feeling horribly guilty, so he now has to feel the guilt as he continues searching for a home.
Roleplay Sample: Todo smiled as he glanced across the realm of the Jazz Village. He knew the truth, this would be the day those Jazz Legends would feel the true wrath of a giant. He then walked across the entire span of the field, a very large one. When he arrived at the gate keeper of the Village hidden in the Jazz, he gave a sideways glance. The movement was fast, hardly noticeable, and he had to be careful not to release any chakra, but he pulled off the silent kill flawlessly. \"This village wont have a prayer. Just another obscure name to add to my repertoire\" he said as he walked past a sign. [Welcome to Jazz Village Population:12.3]
by Seu Nara Yesterday at 3:17 am- Please return, or repost your application when you are serious. This dose not even count as a proper apllication....
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 3:19 am
...please repost your approval when you are serious >_>
by mitsuhide aketchi Yesterday at 3:27 am
you will not be approved until you create a serious app. and consider this a warning
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 3:30 am
I must ask what mistake has been made. I followed the format as closely as I could, and now I am being excoriated? What could I possibly fix besides the sad tale of a man who wondered out of a village destroyed only to find himself becoming the village destroyer he hated! I cannot top it.
If it\'s about my roleplay all apologies I am new to the whole \"RP\"
by Utahime Yesterday at 3:38 am
1. There\'s no such thing as Hidden Village in the Erasers
2. There is no such thing as \'The Bilims (One of the most powerful before the Eraser village was destroyed)\'
3. I don\'t think you may use this:
Jutsus:» Bako Ding jin no jutsu
Description:The User is able to summon an army of scythes or reapers that will be head every snake in a million mile radius (Warning may miss 98% of snakes and hit civilians if not performed by an expert)
4. None of this:
Jango Demon Jutsu
Description: Used to swarm an army of pencil sharpeners that can instantly grind an army\'s weapons away in the twinkle of an eye rendering them weaponless
5. There is no such thing as \'Jazz Village\'.
6. I\'d also redo your whole history.
7. I\'m pretty sure there\'s no such thing as \'Hobo nins\'.
8. If you need help redoing your application, don\'t hesitate to ask a mod or admin. And also, other applications of other members are free to look at if you need help.
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 3:41 am
I based mine off another application.
And we can\'t make up names? But, without making things up this is hardly a creative RP now is it? Eghast!
And my jutsus are powered low, because I am an academy Sand Student, so no fears they wont be at full destructive force for quite some time.
I am sure we can adequately agree it is approvable now right?
by Utahime Yesterday at 3:43 am
Alright then, I\'m leaving this application to Soul and Okibi. I suggest the other mods do so too..
by Okibi Yesterday at 9:46 pm
1.- Hidden Village in the Erasers doesn\'t exist, like Utahime said. Change it to an existing village.
- Since the village doesn\'t exist, the clan can\'t be from there.
-\'Bako Ding jin no jutsu\'; Can\'t use that jutsu. First of, that should have been the Summoning jutsu. Secondly, there is already a user summoning reapers.
-\'Jango Demon Jutsu\';take that jutsu off. Makes no sense.
-\'Umbrella jump Whip\'; can you explain the \' means of transportation\' part?
-According to the first idea that i wrote, you need to shape your app accordingly, to make sense with the existing Naruto world.
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 10:28 pm
I know like an annoying noobert I am, but I have been following the series. From the looks of what I know about Naruto, there is no proof that the Village hidden in the erasers doesn\'t exist, because not every village has been demonstrated. And even if it doesn\'t exist, that further would prove what I have been saying. It got destroyed, and the author hasn\'t shown every village to exist. Since it hasn\'t been introduced in any way. So can\'t we just let it slide as possible? ^_^? I mean I know it\'s been called silly, but I am not trying to create an affront to Naruto, just expand on an idea that hasn\'t been tested....^_^
Can I change it to rakes? And I am using the jutsus in his native tongue, a rare breed of language that even though he doesn\'t speak it, it\'s his heritage.
I will take the other jutsu off....But it was a good one.
He uses the umbrella whip as a rocket/Slingshot. As I said, it\'s a physics problem very complex that allows him to shoot himself from spot to spot ^_^
And I will change my app, but after we get these couple minor issue straightened out so that I don\'t force you to return to the wall of text every 5 seconds
by Okibi Yesterday at 11:02 pm
it\'s better if you simply change it to an existing one. Our RPG is based on Naruto, not a \' copy \' of it and, therefore, we have already established the existing villages.
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 11:37 pm
Alright question.
I want to stay in a clan, but if I join a Stone village for example, how will I know what clan to stay in?
Of course this is the easiest way to get banned so just keep that in mind. If there is anything Q, I, and other CR veterans know, it\'s screwing with a site can always be a hell of a time. If I were you guys though, I would do the missions before attempting to reason with mods about the existance of the Village Hidden in the Erasers. Just becuase they are ignorant doesn\'t mean you should try to make them see the truth right away. Have fun.
Todo Forashi
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 2:56 amName: Todo Forashi
Age:51
Gender:male
Village:Hidden Village in the Erasers
Clan: The Bilims (One of the most powerful before the Eraser village was destroyed)
Elements: Lighting/Earth
Rank: academy student (Hobo Nins quite a bit, bit of a wanderer)
Style: Taijutsu with a touch of personal Ninjutsu
Looks:
Personality:Very Friendly But he has a temper. He is wise and sagely, but despite his age he has a youthful vigor in him. And he has a very epicurean taste which leads to him getting in fights at Ramen Shops and Bad Music stores.
Jutsus:» Bako Ding jin no jutsu
Description:The User is able to summon an army of scythes or reapers that will be head every snake in a million mile radius (Warning may miss 98% of snakes and hit civilians if not performed by an expert)
» Umbrella jump Whip
Description: Turns his Destructive umbrella into a an exploding whip using his mechanical energy (It\'s actually part jutsu part physics problem and is also his main means of transportation)
Jango Demon Jutsu
Description: Used to swarm an army of pencil sharpeners that can instantly grind an army\'s weapons away in the twinkle of an eye rendering them weaponless
Background/History: Born in the village hidden in the erasers as the Chief\'s son, he looked destined to become the Next Chief. But on that dreadful day, snakes burst up from the ground and the underground caverns. Not just any snake. Crystallized Cavern snakes. These snakes were nearly indestructible and destroyed the entire village in a venomous attack. Todo barely got out alive, but he did get alive.
He then wandered most of the Ninja nations for a long time, eventually he went to the Sand village, where he became a scary warlord over the nations and slept underneath palm trees. But eventually he became a laughing stock, so to end his horrid reputation, he destroyed both the Snake Village and the Lightyear village. But this ended in his feeling horribly guilty, so he now has to feel the guilt as he continues searching for a home.
Roleplay Sample: Todo smiled as he glanced across the realm of the Jazz Village. He knew the truth, this would be the day those Jazz Legends would feel the true wrath of a giant. He then walked across the entire span of the field, a very large one. When he arrived at the gate keeper of the Village hidden in the Jazz, he gave a sideways glance. The movement was fast, hardly noticeable, and he had to be careful not to release any chakra, but he pulled off the silent kill flawlessly. \"This village wont have a prayer. Just another obscure name to add to my repertoire\" he said as he walked past a sign. [Welcome to Jazz Village Population:12.3]
by Seu Nara Yesterday at 3:17 am- Please return, or repost your application when you are serious. This dose not even count as a proper apllication.... by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 3:19 am...please repost your approval when you are serious >_>
by mitsuhide aketchi Yesterday at 3:27 amyou will not be approved until you create a serious app. and consider this a warning
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 3:30 amI must ask what mistake has been made. I followed the format as closely as I could, and now I am being excoriated? What could I possibly fix besides the sad tale of a man who wondered out of a village destroyed only to find himself becoming the village destroyer he hated! I cannot top it.
If it\'s about my roleplay all apologies I am new to the whole \"RP\"
by Utahime Yesterday at 3:38 am1. There\'s no such thing as Hidden Village in the Erasers
2. There is no such thing as \'The Bilims (One of the most powerful before the Eraser village was destroyed)\'
3. I don\'t think you may use this:
Jutsus:» Bako Ding jin no jutsu
Description:The User is able to summon an army of scythes or reapers that will be head every snake in a million mile radius (Warning may miss 98% of snakes and hit civilians if not performed by an expert)
4. None of this:
Jango Demon Jutsu
Description: Used to swarm an army of pencil sharpeners that can instantly grind an army\'s weapons away in the twinkle of an eye rendering them weaponless
5. There is no such thing as \'Jazz Village\'.
6. I\'d also redo your whole history.
7. I\'m pretty sure there\'s no such thing as \'Hobo nins\'.
8. If you need help redoing your application, don\'t hesitate to ask a mod or admin. And also, other applications of other members are free to look at if you need help.
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 3:41 amI based mine off another application.
And we can\'t make up names? But, without making things up this is hardly a creative RP now is it? Eghast!
And my jutsus are powered low, because I am an academy Sand Student, so no fears they wont be at full destructive force for quite some time.
I am sure we can adequately agree it is approvable now right?
by Utahime Yesterday at 3:43 amAlright then, I\'m leaving this application to Soul and Okibi. I suggest the other mods do so too..
by Okibi Yesterday at 9:46 pm1.- Hidden Village in the Erasers doesn\'t exist, like Utahime said. Change it to an existing village.
- Since the village doesn\'t exist, the clan can\'t be from there.
-\'Bako Ding jin no jutsu\'; Can\'t use that jutsu. First of, that should have been the Summoning jutsu. Secondly, there is already a user summoning reapers.
-\'Jango Demon Jutsu\';take that jutsu off. Makes no sense.
-\'Umbrella jump Whip\'; can you explain the \' means of transportation\' part?
-According to the first idea that i wrote, you need to shape your app accordingly, to make sense with the existing Naruto world.
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 10:28 pmI know like an annoying noobert I am, but I have been following the series. From the looks of what I know about Naruto, there is no proof that the Village hidden in the erasers doesn\'t exist, because not every village has been demonstrated. And even if it doesn\'t exist, that further would prove what I have been saying. It got destroyed, and the author hasn\'t shown every village to exist. Since it hasn\'t been introduced in any way. So can\'t we just let it slide as possible? ^_^? I mean I know it\'s been called silly, but I am not trying to create an affront to Naruto, just expand on an idea that hasn\'t been tested....^_^
Can I change it to rakes? And I am using the jutsus in his native tongue, a rare breed of language that even though he doesn\'t speak it, it\'s his heritage.
I will take the other jutsu off....But it was a good one.
He uses the umbrella whip as a rocket/Slingshot. As I said, it\'s a physics problem very complex that allows him to shoot himself from spot to spot ^_^
And I will change my app, but after we get these couple minor issue straightened out so that I don\'t force you to return to the wall of text every 5 seconds
by Okibi Yesterday at 11:02 pmit\'s better if you simply change it to an existing one. Our RPG is based on Naruto, not a \' copy \' of it and, therefore, we have already established the existing villages.
by Therandomjohnny Yesterday at 11:37 pmAlright question.
I want to stay in a clan, but if I join a Stone village for example, how will I know what clan to stay in?
Of course this is the easiest way to get banned so just keep that in mind. If there is anything Q, I, and other CR veterans know, it\'s screwing with a site can always be a hell of a time. If I were you guys though, I would do the missions before attempting to reason with mods about the existance of the Village Hidden in the Erasers. Just becuase they are ignorant doesn\'t mean you should try to make them see the truth right away. Have fun.
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